Infiltration (Brigits Flame Dec Week 1 Comp)

[aquarius_galuxy]

Title: Infiltration
Author: Aquarius Galuxy
Fiction type: Prose, original fiction (Novel idea #2)
Genre: Action/Adventure, Suspense
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: some gore and violence, maybe murder/death
Word count: 1,129
Summary: An assassin infiltrates an enemy's hideout to save her brother.
Author's Notes: Written for brigits_flame's December Week 1 contest,

Comments

[desert_rose]

Oh.....

I really got into this piece!

You have done an excellent job with this! I love all the action- it's paced really well, and kept me glued to my computer right up until it ended.

You ended this at a good place. It didn't end too abruptly- you ended it at a point that leaves me in suspense, ready for the next chapter. This would definitely work as a longer story!

[aquarius_galuxy]

=D Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[cutecrazyice]

Wow. So much action. I would love it more if you continued this. :D

[aquarius_galuxy]

Maybe in the future, I haven't thought that far yet! =p

[vyvyan_wilde]

Really thrilling piece :3 The pace of it was perfect, and engaged me from the very beginning.
If you do write a continuation of this, I would enjoy reading it and finding out what happens next.

[aquarius_galuxy]

=O thank you, and I'll keep that in mind! =D

ROAR

[chickybluesky87]

I really liked this piece! This really does have a great pace, and perfect ending. I think It also stands alone really well, I don't need to know the back story to understand or appreciate it. Great work!

Re: ROAR

[aquarius_galuxy]

thank you, I'm glad you liked it! =D

[aquarius_galuxy]

Thank you! =D I'll write more when it hits me!