Balloon

[aqueerpanic]

title: Balloon
pairing: g-ri
genre: FLUFF
a/n: okay so, first fic for g-ri, i did this in one night SO IT SUCKS D; SORRY. but, you can definitely count on better written higher quality fics in the near future. simple story line cause i was in a rush, nothing too complicated at all.

Comments

[haelin]

SPOT!

[peligr0]

spot XD

[peligr0]

awwwww this is so good!!! i kept on stopping, really because i want to take it all in. loving every little thing about it. i love the part where jiyong kept on throwing notes to seungri. gaaah! i like that a lot. i like how their relationship gradually developed into something more special. makes me want to cry from happiness <333.

[aqueerpanic]

haha thank you so much!

i actually thought i rushed their relationship a little too much so it's nice to hear that you thought it gradually developed. >____<...

[peligr0]

it did!!! waaah i love it. ok... re-reading it now... and giggling like crazy haha

[aqueerpanic]

ahaha i appreciate long comments the most though! :P

its very reassuring to know that you thought it was natural. to me, though, i thought their relationship was very rushed, but that could just be me and my detailed self >___>?

yeah, ill definitely show improvement in my next fic, hopefully. i wanted to hurry and get my first story up so i didnt put the effort through to edit ANYTHING and so i bet there are a lot of parts where it didnt flow and sounded choppy. :/ so look forward to a BETTER WRITTEN, BETTER STORYLINE soon, ahaha.

LOL its okay, i do that too sometimes, but i can only do it when no one is around or else ill just feel completely awkward .____. but ill definitely do that more often.

thank you so much for reading! <33

[aishiteru_amie]

spot! and that's not sucks!
it's awesome.
coming back later for better comment.

[ani_ami]

Very sweet story. Love it :x

[aqueerpanic]

thank you for reading!