awww...that was bittersweet. it's one of the worst thing that can happen to an artist... to loose his sight. i can almost feel the pain. T_T
Jiyong watching Seungri as if he were starring at some kind of masterpiece, Seungri listening to the sound of Jiyong’s breathing as if it was an amazing musical composition. THIS <3. words fail me now. thanks so much for the awesome fic.
i was so immersed while reading this story. i laughed, cursed Seunghyun and cried for Jiyong and Seungri. One of the fics that made impact to me recently. This is very well-written.
How can Seungri get any more unfortunate? First losing his hearing and now his eyesight? My goodness. But I love how this was written, it flows very well.
the only thing that made me sad about this fic really...is... that's it?! that's the end? it kinda felt hanging for me. but overall Good job! You should really write more.
haha yeah...top was kind of a douche in this fic :P
it makes me feel very satisfied that it had an impact on people and that it flowed well. the style of writing in this fic is very choppy and short, so sometimes it comes off as being un-flowy? its good that it seems like it flows :]
yeah haha. i really wanted to end this fic. before i ended this, i pictured the ending to be a lot longer, something like theyd figure things out, you know? a little more into their lives after everything, but. i got impatient, so i apologize T____T
maybe you can write an epilogue? hehe. you know, just for a better closure and a glimpse of their life after "the storm". it felt like it ended very quick. hehe. so yeah. i kinda demand? LOL. XD i hope you're not busy. haha.
i feel kinda happy that there are more active gri writers these days. there was a time where the comm just died and fanfics are scarce. it was so sad then. but nowadays, at least i can read some good gri fics. :D
hmm...if i write an epilogue it'll prolly be just another short story thing like i did in this fic, like how they're divided into different scenes? yeah, just one short scene of...hm, idk. ill have to think of some romantic sappy stuff later, bahaha. maybe some scene dealing with seungri's new blindness...? yeah, something. but if you really thought the story ended that fast and didnt have any kind of substantial ending, ill write an epilogue for sure :]
haha, yeah, i realized that too. its one of the reasons why i actually started writing g-ri fics in the first place xD. i love how wickedlove13 is writing a chaptered fic, and its reallyyyy good so far<33 also, there have actually been real life g-ri moments these days, so its awesome, haha.
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oh nooo. go ahead and write it >D dont let me stop you, haha.
yeah, the style of writing in this fic was definitely very choppy and short, but i intended it to be like that, like...yeah. idk how to explain it. Dx but ill work on that in my next fic.
and yeah, for that, i knew people were gonna think like, wait, winter is like death, right? but with the flower imagery, i wanted to express the ending of an old life, and the slow beginning of a new one? slow as in the time period between the transition of one season to the next? like, all the white showing a clean, new slate, and ending all the old, and then melting it all away and starting new with spring?
idk. i guess im expecting too much thought from my readers, ahaha >___>...
oh haha. well, ill be sure to do that in my next story just so it wont bother you!
thank you so much for readinggg and commenting! <33
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Jiyong watching Seungri as if he were starring at some kind of masterpiece, Seungri listening to the sound of Jiyong’s breathing as if it was an amazing musical composition.
THIS <3. words fail me now. thanks so much for the awesome fic.
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thank YOU for reading! :D
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ily for writing this. write more hehe <3. will look forward to them XD.
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How can Seungri get any more unfortunate? First losing his hearing and now his eyesight? My goodness. But I love how this was written, it flows very well.
the only thing that made me sad about this fic really...is... that's it?! that's the end? it kinda felt hanging for me. but overall Good job! You should really write more.
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it makes me feel very satisfied that it had an impact on people and that it flowed well. the style of writing in this fic is very choppy and short, so sometimes it comes off as being un-flowy? its good that it seems like it flows :]
yeah haha. i really wanted to end this fic. before i ended this, i pictured the ending to be a lot longer, something like theyd figure things out, you know? a little more into their lives after everything, but. i got impatient, so i apologize T____T
thank you veryyy much for reading!
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i feel kinda happy that there are more active gri writers these days. there was a time where the comm just died and fanfics are scarce. it was so sad then. but nowadays, at least i can read some good gri fics. :D
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haha, yeah, i realized that too. its one of the reasons why i actually started writing g-ri fics in the first place xD. i love how wickedlove13 is writing a chaptered fic, and its reallyyyy good so far<33 also, there have actually been real life g-ri moments these days, so its awesome, haha.
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yeah, the style of writing in this fic was definitely very choppy and short, but i intended it to be like that, like...yeah. idk how to explain it. Dx but ill work on that in my next fic.
and yeah, for that, i knew people were gonna think like, wait, winter is like death, right? but with the flower imagery, i wanted to express the ending of an old life, and the slow beginning of a new one? slow as in the time period between the transition of one season to the next? like, all the white showing a clean, new slate, and ending all the old, and then melting it all away and starting new with spring?
idk. i guess im expecting too much thought from my readers, ahaha >___>...
oh haha. well, ill be sure to do that in my next story just so it wont bother you!
thank you so much for readinggg and commenting!
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you're a great writer and you pieced it all together wonderfully. characterization is great, too. thanks so much for sharing (:
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