Time to Pretend

Jul 21, 2010 03:28


Time to Pretend [Drabble]
Jiyong/Seungri | PG13 | Fanservice! Fic, Canon | 1,347
It was only supposed to be a game of pretend.

a/n: okay so you might be seeing a lot of these little-short-drabblely fics these days cause i'm going to start working on another one of my lengthy fics, like the Dream Maker fic or Morning Coffee. it takes a long time for ( Read more... )

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azenzensation_0 July 21 2010, 11:30:06 UTC
aww T___T
omg a bug???? well i had that happen to me once.... -_-' i was at the beach and i was in the water having fun and then my cousin started freaking out and i'm thinking oMG SHARK!!! but then she points to my head and says theres a huge bug stuck in my hair and i freaked out and started to run out of the water and i had my mom take the bug out and OMG it was nasty and huge and had wings!!!!

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ai_fantasy9 July 21 2010, 17:13:09 UTC
bugs and little critters are DISGUSTING! I hate them so much = =

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griluvisvip July 21 2010, 18:25:00 UTC
really? I think bugs and little critters are kinda cute XD I love watching them crawl around and trying to figure out what they're thinking about as they journey across my floor or desk. Probably something like, "Just keep walking, pretend like I'm just a speck of dirt with legs, and maybe that beast over there won't notice me and squash me...Just keep walking, just keep walking..." XDD

bugs aside, that was really angsty and nice at the same time XD Makes me wanna cuddle them and protect them from the evil, unaccepting world XDD

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peligr0 July 22 2010, 00:56:47 UTC
LOLing forever at your comment :)))

i'm not afraid of bugs too. yeah they are kind of cute. lol. what i'm afraid of are amphibians and reptiles /cringes.

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ai_fantasy9 July 21 2010, 17:26:47 UTC
OMG THOSE THINGS ARE NASTY LOOKING! Just thinking about it landing on your head have me shivering with disgust.

But I'm so glad you finished this fic. The dedication you show for GRI T_T

Great fic btw. I love your writing so much. I can't wait for more of your writings :)

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aqueerpanic July 22 2010, 02:15:20 UTC
it was sooo scary cause it fell out onto my desk and made this click noise cause its shell was so hard x____x

i know :'] without knowing where it crawled to, i continued and finished this fic!

thank you veryy much. i have a feeling the one im starting will be very long, so look forward to it!

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I LOVE MGMT! peligr0 July 22 2010, 00:36:37 UTC
YOU ALWAYS PICK AWESOME SONGS TO LISTEN TO WHEN YOU'RE WRITING! haha haven't commented on your previous most recent fics but really, your song choices happen to be my faves ROFL.

i will comment back after i read this hehe.

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Re: I LOVE MGMT! peligr0 July 22 2010, 01:08:16 UTC
omg this is... sad. the angst TT___TT . i was trying to fight the angst but you wrote this so nice so it's ok haha.

He's just trying to be happy, so he plays along in Jiyong's game of pretend and cradles his heart on a thread to keep it from falling.
^ August 2007. this. oh seungri.

And Seungri wonders if that’s only what Jiyong’s been doing. Having fun.

Having fun never seemed so selfish.
^TT_TT yeah, having fun isn't supposed to be selfish...

He's so confused, because, well, there were no cameras around.

He's starting to feel claustrophobic with Jiyong's arms, one on each side of his head, trapping him with no where to hide.
^omg maknae, i'm sorry that you feel this way.

and i like the ending. <3

awww the things you do to write gri. i hope you're ok now. stay awesome!

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Re: I LOVE MGMT! aqueerpanic July 22 2010, 02:19:28 UTC
yeah i know! i wondered where all my dedicated and faithful readers went to since they haven't commented yet! ;[ im glad you commented though. reassures me that my regular readers are still alive X[

yeah, i try not to make it so angsty, cause it makes me go weird and then i start writing EVERYTHING angsty, haha.

yeah, i guess it's kind of left for interpretation. some can see it as an agsty ending or a happy one. of course, i always like to think of it as a happy ending :']

yes, so dedicated :'] haha, thank you for commenting! cause everyone seems to have abandoned me D;

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Re: I LOVE MGMT! aqueerpanic July 22 2010, 02:21:33 UTC
OH and i LOVE MGMT! haha X] their lyrics are amazing! im planning on writing another fic based off their song "It's Working" but i think the pairing will be GTOP or maybe even Eunhae from Super Junior
:D

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oxygenlove July 23 2010, 09:54:30 UTC
so i looked up the song first and i didn't finish it cause it was making me feel really really down (i was already down to begin with). I got 3/4 of the way though. until the part where, "and we'll date more models" cause that's just how far i can take the angst and how it relates to g-ri.

and that is even before i read this.

and reading this really made me feel a lot more heavier. it's pretend, it's having fun and it's oh-so-not-real when there are no cameras around.

He's just trying to be happy, so he plays along in Jiyong's game of pretend and cradles his heart on a thread to keep it from falling.
I have something in my drafts similar to this, though Seungri's feelings are quite the opposite of yours. hur. Why did this fic make me feel so sad.

/kills bug

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aqueerpanic July 23 2010, 17:28:43 UTC
relating gri to the song just makes it so much angstier, yeah? regardless of the fact that the song sounds upbeat haha. do you listen to mgmt? if not, start. their lyrics are just. wow.

oh did you? Idk, I've read so many fics with the same prompt it was hard to not repat anything from others @___@

but I'm sorry you're feeling down! and this obviously did not make you feel better X[ please, DO feel better and I hope things are goiing well with you.

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oxygenlove July 24 2010, 11:50:49 UTC
yes, it doubled the angst by a hundred fold. i don't really listen to mgmt /sorry

ah! i meant in my drafts, as in i haven't posted it out yet, like it's still waiting fr the right moment to be included in a fic, haha. so do not worry!!!

ah, i love angst. angst is love. i'd so love to write angst right now. lol.

anyway, thanks for this fic!

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aqueerpanic July 25 2010, 08:23:36 UTC
ahh, well, i only like a few of their songs honestly. but really, their lyrics are great<33

oh really? thats awesome how you do that, write things then eventually put it into a complete work.

haha, i like fluffy things X] but i find it a little easier sometimes to write angst.

thank YOU for reading and commenting!

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stupidefleurk July 25 2010, 18:54:51 UTC
Just come back from holiday I can comment now !lol
I read this in the afternoon ,I was in my bed in underwear ,fighting against the flies,almost dead thanks to the hot.But fortunatly I was saved with this awesome fanfic keke

Honestly I didn't listen to the song cause in the past I played it so much in my mp4 that now I'm sick of it XD But yeah,the lyrics are great and the band in general.

Huh fanservice D: I hate this word.I don't know who invent this concept so cute but at the same time so fuck up.
I think it was fanservice at the first but it changed.Because when Jiyong is angry he doesn't hide it and can act like a bitch -_- ("yah daesung ,that's why I like you better than Seungri").

"---that you like him? Only in front of the cameras, though, right?"

"That's not---"

"It's fake."

Are you trying to kill me ?! ;_;
But it's ok ,kill me with your beautiful angst as long as you want ♥

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aqueerpanic July 28 2010, 05:25:01 UTC
yayyy!!! i was so worried about my faithful readers. i thought they all abandoned me, so thank you for commenting TT_____TT!!!

oh yeah? i totally know that feeling (the radio D<) but yes, the lyrics were magnificent in this song, so as long as you knew them, no need to listen. the song fits kind of weird though if you listen to it in the background :/ haha.

yeah it is, isnt it? :| they should just refer to it as showing affection to one another? D:? jiyong is a total bitch when hes angry, and its so completely obvious when hes in a bad mood =____=

haha, thank you for coming back from holiday and commenting! i was worried my readers left meeee~ :'[

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