Time to Pretend [Drabble]
Jiyong/Seungri | PG13 | Fanservice! Fic, Canon | 1,347
It was only supposed to be a game of pretend.
a/n: okay so you might be seeing a lot of these little-short-drabblely fics these days cause i'm going to start working on another one of my lengthy fics, like the Dream Maker fic or Morning Coffee. it takes a long time for
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omg a bug???? well i had that happen to me once.... -_-' i was at the beach and i was in the water having fun and then my cousin started freaking out and i'm thinking oMG SHARK!!! but then she points to my head and says theres a huge bug stuck in my hair and i freaked out and started to run out of the water and i had my mom take the bug out and OMG it was nasty and huge and had wings!!!!
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bugs aside, that was really angsty and nice at the same time XD Makes me wanna cuddle them and protect them from the evil, unaccepting world XDD
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i'm not afraid of bugs too. yeah they are kind of cute. lol. what i'm afraid of are amphibians and reptiles /cringes.
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But I'm so glad you finished this fic. The dedication you show for GRI T_T
Great fic btw. I love your writing so much. I can't wait for more of your writings :)
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i know :'] without knowing where it crawled to, i continued and finished this fic!
thank you veryy much. i have a feeling the one im starting will be very long, so look forward to it!
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i will comment back after i read this hehe.
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He's just trying to be happy, so he plays along in Jiyong's game of pretend and cradles his heart on a thread to keep it from falling.
^ August 2007. this. oh seungri.
And Seungri wonders if that’s only what Jiyong’s been doing. Having fun.
Having fun never seemed so selfish.
^TT_TT yeah, having fun isn't supposed to be selfish...
He's so confused, because, well, there were no cameras around.
He's starting to feel claustrophobic with Jiyong's arms, one on each side of his head, trapping him with no where to hide.
^omg maknae, i'm sorry that you feel this way.
and i like the ending. <3
awww the things you do to write gri. i hope you're ok now. stay awesome!
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yeah, i try not to make it so angsty, cause it makes me go weird and then i start writing EVERYTHING angsty, haha.
yeah, i guess it's kind of left for interpretation. some can see it as an agsty ending or a happy one. of course, i always like to think of it as a happy ending :']
yes, so dedicated :'] haha, thank you for commenting! cause everyone seems to have abandoned me D;
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:D
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and that is even before i read this.
and reading this really made me feel a lot more heavier. it's pretend, it's having fun and it's oh-so-not-real when there are no cameras around.
He's just trying to be happy, so he plays along in Jiyong's game of pretend and cradles his heart on a thread to keep it from falling.
I have something in my drafts similar to this, though Seungri's feelings are quite the opposite of yours. hur. Why did this fic make me feel so sad.
/kills bug
♥
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oh did you? Idk, I've read so many fics with the same prompt it was hard to not repat anything from others @___@
but I'm sorry you're feeling down! and this obviously did not make you feel better X[ please, DO feel better and I hope things are goiing well with you.
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ah! i meant in my drafts, as in i haven't posted it out yet, like it's still waiting fr the right moment to be included in a fic, haha. so do not worry!!!
ah, i love angst. angst is love. i'd so love to write angst right now. lol.
anyway, thanks for this fic!
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oh really? thats awesome how you do that, write things then eventually put it into a complete work.
haha, i like fluffy things X] but i find it a little easier sometimes to write angst.
thank YOU for reading and commenting!
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I read this in the afternoon ,I was in my bed in underwear ,fighting against the flies,almost dead thanks to the hot.But fortunatly I was saved with this awesome fanfic keke
Honestly I didn't listen to the song cause in the past I played it so much in my mp4 that now I'm sick of it XD But yeah,the lyrics are great and the band in general.
Huh fanservice D: I hate this word.I don't know who invent this concept so cute but at the same time so fuck up.
I think it was fanservice at the first but it changed.Because when Jiyong is angry he doesn't hide it and can act like a bitch -_- ("yah daesung ,that's why I like you better than Seungri").
"---that you like him? Only in front of the cameras, though, right?"
"That's not---"
"It's fake."
Are you trying to kill me ?! ;_;
But it's ok ,kill me with your beautiful angst as long as you want ♥
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oh yeah? i totally know that feeling (the radio D<) but yes, the lyrics were magnificent in this song, so as long as you knew them, no need to listen. the song fits kind of weird though if you listen to it in the background :/ haha.
yeah it is, isnt it? :| they should just refer to it as showing affection to one another? D:? jiyong is a total bitch when hes angry, and its so completely obvious when hes in a bad mood =____=
haha, thank you for coming back from holiday and commenting! i was worried my readers left meeee~ :'[
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