Time to Pretend

Jul 21, 2010 03:28


Time to Pretend [Drabble]
Jiyong/Seungri | PG13 | Fanservice! Fic, Canon | 1,347
It was only supposed to be a game of pretend.

a/n: okay so you might be seeing a lot of these little-short-drabblely fics these days cause i'm going to start working on another one of my lengthy fics, like the Dream Maker fic or Morning Coffee. it takes a long time for ( Read more... )

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papersanguine July 28 2010, 03:35:22 UTC
I love every single word of this fic. I remember hearing that song a year or two ago and I didn't really give it much thought. However, I love that after hearing it you came up with this. The use of "pretend" though out the fic and how Seungri tried so hard to keep hold of that even with the confusing actions of Jiyong was beautiful.

his name imprinted on his heart without his intention This so perfectly describes how it feels to be in love; Sometimes it's against your will. It just happens and you fall in line or fight it.

He was so caught up in the idea that Jiyong was some obsessed perfectionist that he forgot they were friends sometimes. I love the picture you gave here. I can completely feel how he kind of hates Jiyong because he loves him and almost forgets that he used to actually be friends with him when things were simple.

Sorry for the massive run-on sentences. Somehow every single fic you write draws my breath and makes me pretty incoherent. <3

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aqueerpanic July 28 2010, 05:33:15 UTC
yeah, same here. it just seemed like a retro song, you know? then i actually listened into the lyrics and it just struck my inspiration and totally reminded me of fanservice and gri and yeah, the creation of this fic.

omg, im so happy you commented. tbh, i thought all of my faithful and all-the-time readers/commenters abandoned me :[ then i see this chunky and epic comment and i knew it was you! yay! but theyre slowly coming back and commenting. so thank you so much for commenting, as alwaysss :] im ecstatic that you enjoyed it<33

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papersanguine July 28 2010, 17:35:47 UTC
Haha, since we're being honest, I get all excited whenever i see your name attached to a fic because i know it's going to make me think; And my brain definitely does not get enough activity. You always have this interesting way of looking at things.

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aqueerpanic July 31 2010, 08:23:18 UTC
aw, that makes me really happy! i don't think i'll be finishing my current fic in awhile, but i might do what i did with The Dream Maker and post a preview. BUT it also might be my first chaptered fic. we'll see :]

haha, yeah, i guess it's just that my fics are really inspired and based on the really small details that happen in my life. so i take all the little things and expand them into something i hope will seem insightful and profound and different. thats why i like writing AUs so much ;D

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