The Smiting Ceremony has arrived. Enjoy!

[araeph]

If you participated and have questions about how I characterized you, please tell me. Also, please let me know if there's anything wrong, grammatically, logically, or otherwise, with this segment. I left the italics on for nearly half of the OFUCI visit, and no one informed me.

Comments

[hellga]

Great ceremony!

Both Hellga and Lambda enjoyed it greatly. However, it seemed that Lambda was the one who should have read the Silm passage, as Hellga was sitting in the middle row. Could you please correct that discrepancy, marring the otherwise great work?

[araeph]

It hath been fixed. Thanks for reading! I tried to work in a toxic injection of the Sue, but there just wasn't enough room.

[puredeadthingy]

Brilliant.

Ka-BLOOIE!

[everloyal]

I love it! 'Nuff said.

(Meheheh...I threw a spork! >=D)

[agentmaly]

One small edit: Sharp pointy objects were waved in liberally in the air as Mara completed the charges. You've got an extra 'in' there. Other than that, most excellent. You wrote Maly very well indeed, and she thanks you.

[araeph]

Many thanks for pointing that out. I feel so insecure, not having a beta. Maly was a fun character to write. In fact, all of these agents were; we're so quirky!

That can only mean...

...we must smite another Sue some time.

[greyladybast]

Awesome! An excellent job, and a fun read. I particularly liked the "feral gleam" in the eyes bit, and the butt-smiting. Funny stuff!

Good work.

Bast