Ek LJ non-regular ki peeda ;-)

[aramanath]

Bahut dinon baad dost mila
Man jaise ek phool khila
Haath milaya aur phir poocha
Kya sab kuch hai changa-bhala?

Is par dost gusse me aaya
Dekh meri taraf gurraya
LJ pe to sab post kiya hai
Dwapar yug se aaya hai kya?

Dus log comment bhi kar chuke
Tu LJ kyon nahin padhta be?
Kuch poochna ho to wahin pooch
Sar mat kha, chal bhaag yahaan se!

Comments

[peeyush]

ROTFL... Awesome! Makes it to my LJ Memories. Hindi day ke saaren awards tumhe hi milenge.

[aramanath]

:-)

[pinch_hitter]

vaHa dosta kOna HE ?

[aramanath]

usako merA duSamana bananA cAHate Ho kyA?

[vivekm]

Dev sahab, pranam. Kya sab kuch hai changa-bhala? Aap se to puch hi sakte hai :)

Waise badi achi kavita hai. Kisi se inspired hai kya ;) ?

[vivekm]

I mean aapka poem likhne ka shauk kisi se inspired hai kya :D

[aramanath]

Shukriya gurudev. Yahaan sab theek hai.

Waise LJ par to is kavita wale dost se bhi kuch bhi pooch
sakte ho ... bahut sabhya lagega. Lekin LJ ke bahar baat
bhi nahin karta hai ... kuch poocho to kaatne ko daudta hai ;-)

[nvivek]

obviously inspired! But we don't need to mention her name right now. Let's just say it rhymes with 'bhondu' ;-)

[_dodo_]

Nice one.
What is 'changa-bhala'? Marati?

[aramanath]

Thanks. That line means: Is everything fine?

[astra1111]

true true.. totally agreed to what u say here

[aramanath]

Aapke bhi aise dost hain,
ya aap is dost ke jaise ho? :-)