Stage presence, delivery etc

[archieyap]

Reliving last nights stand up effort at the Hyde Park, i have decided not to be so harsh on myself. True, there were bits i was less than happy with, but for something so hastily thrown together, i had some good lines. The nan and grandad dying? And me covered in crumbs? Excellent stuff. Your dads probably just piss on your faces, again lovely

Comments

[mintspanielle]

Yes, 5.7 off for slightly burnt corners, body somewhat mishapen and...were they generic label shorts you were wearing? I bet you didnt even change after house painting.

[archieyap]

Excellent cheek. Call back to last weeks pancake critic 4 points at least. Drawing attention to lack of changed clothes 3. Overall cheek factor 7.9/10