Fanfic: 4 Times

Nov 08, 2010 21:08

Title: 4 Times Finn Walks In On His Almost Step-Brother and Ex-Best Friend Locking Lips, and 1 Time He Doesn't
Pair: Puck/Kurt (Slight Finn/Rachel)
Rating: M to be safe.
Word Count: ~4600
Summary: The title says it all.
Disclaimer: Well, Christmas is coming up. Maybe if I'm really good Santa'll bring me my very own Glee? No? Oh, alright then.
A/N: Well ( Read more... )

fandom: glee, pairing: puck/kurt, rating: m, oneshot

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kirke_novak November 9 2010, 08:19:28 UTC
Poor Finn, poor Burt and poor Puck and Kurt who are about to be interrupted like whoa.
Loved this fic, Finn's POV and how awesome Rachel was, especially when she didn't let Finn interrupt Puckurt make out session on Finn's bed.

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archilymn November 9 2010, 15:56:46 UTC
Well, ah, at least it was a nice story for Rachel? ;D

I always felt that Rachel would be the most sensitive to Kurt's plight, seeing as she has two gays dads, and surely they've told her stories from their own childhood, so I can't imagine her being anything but supportive when Kurt gets his new beau.

Jeez, I'm long-winded, thanks for the review. c:

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sony_kit82 November 9 2010, 11:30:00 UTC
When written this way, I appreciate Finn more and I'm reminded as to why I should not wish him ill in the series: the hope that he'll somehow manage to mature. Those moments were so wonderfully depicted even in Finn's scarred mind - and the way he saw them as romantic and real despite his misgivings make those moments even more wonderful. The last bit with Burt was a cherry on top of a very satisfying sundae. :D

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archilymn November 9 2010, 16:09:11 UTC
This, exactly, was my reason for writing him in this light, as unrealistic as it may be in cannon at present; I still do beleive that Finn has great potential to be a super-awesome big brother figure to Kurt, if only he were to relinquish his prior prejudices. The problem with him right now I think, is that he doesn't see Kurt in a romantic way, thusly making his romantic intentions seem ... less real than Finn's own. It's my hope that (and pleasepleaseplease let this happen soon) when Kurt gets his boyfriend, and Finn sees them acting 'normal' and 'coupley' together (look at that, just like he and Rachel) he'll revaluate that thought and fall into proper bigger sibling form.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. ;]

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flordesangre November 9 2010, 18:35:32 UTC
BOOBAGE FOR THE WIN!!

Also, on the same topic, I really liked the Finchel make-out session, short as it was.

And the definite prize goes to Puck & Kurt's condom choice. Glow in the dark is both useful (for lightless scenario) and hilarious.

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archilymn November 11 2010, 16:08:27 UTC
I'm pretty sure the condom choice was Puck, payback for the fruity moodlighting or something. c:

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loveme_likethat November 9 2010, 19:07:55 UTC
"Me what the hell?! Dude! You what the hell?!"

Such perfect Finnspeak! I can just see his adorably scrunched up face as he says it.

Utterly adorable, this. Well done.

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archilymn November 11 2010, 15:37:40 UTC
The formula for perfect Finnspeak: "Dude, ____________. Dude."

Hee, thank you~

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sj_r November 9 2010, 21:02:16 UTC
(and the only reason he knows those terms at all is because Rachel managed to talk him into boning up on his gay sex knowledge, for Kurt's sake. 'He's your brother Finn, what if he comes to you with questions? It's your duty to be able to answer!')

You've killed me from laughter.

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archilymn November 11 2010, 15:30:29 UTC
Good thing I have my CPR certificate~

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