Shot in the heart

Mar 06, 2017 21:00

It’s ok to be sad, I told myself as I sunk into the plane seat. Around me families, couples, friends were organising themselves to prepare for 13 hours of being trapped in a metal cigar. I was in mourning, like an idiot, for something that never existed. Nothing had changed, except I had. A life of dull progress interspersed with intensely painful ( Read more... )

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mrstotten March 10 2017, 21:04:33 UTC
I liked this, very raw and honest

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aresrising05 March 11 2017, 07:45:50 UTC
Thank you

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dee_aar2 March 12 2017, 01:19:00 UTC
This was so poignant ..... The emotions so raw and so touching ...

" One day I’d be scenery dressing in an old photo " and " I needed to move on, so that one day she would be a background character in my story as well. "
I thought these were the best lines that told your theme in a nutshell.

Moving on is so difficult .... :(

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aresrising05 March 14 2017, 17:49:41 UTC
thank you, I'm quite proud of this one

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