smile again LOL

[arithion]

Title: Smile: With Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: None really, heavy Fuji/Tez friendship… imply all you want though…ok and I’m willing to admit shonen-ai hints too…*grumbles*
Chapter: Nine
Summary: What’s behind a smile…?
Warning: Shonen ai heh… and well… I rewatched 21 and 22… and this is kinda

Comments

[yuki_scorpio]

.... Please see my comment for the last part!

[arithion]

*snicker* you're just a hentai MWUAH HAH HAH

[yuki_scorpio]

I admit I'm a hentai.

But what the hell has that got to do with wanting them to just KISS? XD

[summertea]

+____+ *thwaps the two* Silly little tennis boys. Just kiss already. XO

*keff* Um~ First time commenting. X3; I've actually been reading the other parts too, and really, figured I should speak up now. Really am enjoying the fic. =3

[arithion]

*bounces happily*

YAY... hehe I like to know that people like it... I always worry so much about what I write hehe

thank you for reading!!! *hugs*

[angelamori]

I feel terrible for pointing this out, but there's a typo: 'right hen,'... Sorry, sorry!

Yes, dammit, worship Fuji's lips like they were meant to be! kiss already!

You're stringing all of us along. Isn't this sad? Hahahaha...

[arithion]

no on point away!!! please... I'm bound to miss some things... and I still cant find it... gimme the sentence lol

All I can say... if I know exactly where the kiss will be, if its there... *grins*

[angelamori]

Eh... it's the paragraph where Fuji goes home and finds Tezuka at his doorstep. He observes the 10-minute obsession and wonders if it applies to everything? ^______^;; Use 'ctrl-F' to find the words 'right hen'? Heheheheh. Sorry, I closed the page

[arithion]

wooot got it... thanks!!!

[kateriya]

Probably in agreement with everyone else...just kiss already!

*coughs* that said, Fuji fighting to find himself is very nicely portrayed ^____^ Would huggle him, except I think someone else may be not be too happy about it...XD

[arithion]

oh whew! *hugs* thank you...

I was a little worried about angsting him too much, but I'm trying to make the other sides of him shine through too...
Glad you like it ... and yeah... Tez is a jealous bastard...

[kateriya]

btw, hope you don't mind me adding you ^^; the easier to stalk the fic check for fic updates ^_^

[tensais_heart]

lol not at all... i'll add you back! hehe

[violetfury]

Good chapter. I thought for sure Tezuka would finally give Fuji a kiss. He came so close with touching Fuji's lips.

[arithion]

naaaa... to let them do that would make me nice!!! /snicker

weeeee