"Venomous Pt 5 - Innocuous" Rosie/Carter, Princess Protection Program - G

[arkeis07]

Title: Venomous Part 5 - Innocuous
Fandom: Princess Protection Program
Pairing: Carter/Rosie
Rating: G
Words: ~2800
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, not intended for profit or offense. I own no rights to the subjects.
Summary: A snake bite has aggravated the already fragile relationship between tomboy Carter Mason and misplaced Princess

Comments

[switchfoot13]

not gonna lie, pretty disappointed there was no lip action going on in this one. but it was awesomely cute as usual so that's okay!

more now? :)

[arkeis07]

hey now, cool yourself. This is how the movie should have been written, not how we all ~wish the movie was *there's a distinct difference. It's very scientific, beakers and things are used*

I can assure you, a kiss won't happen until quite near the end. I'm not quite sure when, but it's definitely after the homecoming superfunrescuetime. But hang in there, it comes. Eventually.

Thanks for reading. :)

[krackel20]

ooo i'm so happy there's an update i could kiss you!!

[arkeis07]

*breath mint* Ready! :3

[krackel20]

*pecks on cheek cause i think anywhere else could be misconstrued as cheating by my wife*

i'm kinda happy there's no kiss yet. slow progress FTW.

[arkeis07]

*totally knew you were gonna do that, so accepts cheek kiss with dignity, but a sorrowful sigh*

Me too. I want to build it up. Bc ya know like, it's only been a day since Carter kinda stopped hatin' on the princess /:

[sunburst89]

Gautreaux is my godfather's last name :)

I really do love this. Glad you're continuing it.

[arkeis07]

NGL, I totally looked up Cajun last names, for ~authenticity. And Benoit was listed too. I lol'd x)

I'll finish this if it kills me. At this point, I just want this sucker to be done so I can finally watch PPP without cringing. It's just a bonus that everyone likes it :)

we should aim sometime, js

[bcrebel]

*bounces excitedly*

Yay, new chapter!

PROGRESS!! They're starting to understand each other and I love it. And then Carter blasts Rosie with a hose, and they bond, and Carter thinks Rosie is adorable, and doesn't want to talk about boys, and, and... :D

SAM DEMANDS MOAR!!

[arkeis07]

ICONLOVE<3

Yes, that's exactly the progression I was going for. More coming.... well, I won;t say soon, because whenever I do, next thing I know it's three months later. But, I'm totally srsbizness about finishing this, so it's the only thing I'm working on now.

[bcrebel]

ICONS ARE LIKE THE BEST PART OF THE INTERNET. I WISH I WASN'T POOR SO I COULD HAVE A BUNCH. I WOULD TOTALLY HAVE A BUNCH OF WATCHER'S ICONS THAT NO ONE WOULD GET. AND GIR, FILLER BUNNY AND SQUEE. I HAVE A MARVIN ICON. NEED KATIE FITCH. MOAR CAM. DEMI/SELENA (BECAUSE I FAIL AND DON'T HAVE ANY) AND THEN LIKE 700000 MUSIC RELATED ICONS. MY ENTIRE PERSONALITY CONDENSED DOWN TO 10000 PIXEL SQUARES :D

YEAH DON'T SAY SOON, I DID THAT WITH MY KSM FIC... (see my journal for how that one went)

OMG DAWN/SKYE ICON BECAUSE THEY'RE MY BUFFY VERSE OTP EVEN WHILE SKYE IS AN OC (someone somewhere decided Michele Trachtenberg and Lacey Chabert would be hot together, they made a virtual series about it, true story)

[krackel20]

they ARE hot together.

lacey chabert and amanda seyfriend are my favorite reasons for watching mean girls.
:D

[starstruck768]

This chapter was sort of new, because yeah Ed knows, and yeah that's probably foreshadowing one giant bummer, but man Carter got that stick out of her ass. And that basically overshadowed everything else.

“Can you feel that, Rosie?” So when you made that scene transition right there, I literally sat back and went, "Whoa." I'm not sure if it was just because it was such a sudden change of scenery and mood or what, but that was my favorite part. It was like you threw me into the room with them, sitting there, when I had just previously been outside with them. I'm sure that sounds incredibly dumb, but I find myself lacking in eloquence when trying to comment on your fics lol. I just loved the feeling that scene gave me, it made me smile.

I love this because Rosie/Carter is the only Demi/Selena pairing that I can actually visualize in my head at this point. I've lost all Demi/Selena hope but this pairing will always stay strong with me, so thank you for continuing this. And thank you for making it amazing.

[arkeis07]

Hmm, interesting that you would ~assume a big bummer to take place. That's very ~interesting indeed.

nah, just kidding. I'm not that great of an author to include giant meaningful foreshadowing events. I just needed a way to make it legit that Rosie would wanna invite Ed to her coronation in a foreign land when he only talked to her like, 4 times /:

Can you feel that, Rosie?” That however, was totally planned, and I'm just tickled that you caught it. I definitely wanted it to seem abruptly tense with ~sexual ~energy, and I think I got it :3 *pats back in an obnoxiously non-humble way*
'Course, when my readers are known lovers of D/S smut, it wasn't too hard to convey that ;)

PS the fact that you used the word "eloquence" makes you fancy all the same. Good Job *claps, pinky out*