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aroruae

Strangers [one-shot]

Mar 21, 2012 19:08

Title: Strangers

Pairings: Akame

Genre: AU, angst

Disclaimer: Nope, still not mine and I have a few more hours till I go to sleep.

Summary: They were strangers. They were friends. They were lovers. And then they were nothing.

( And my life changed. )

pairing: akame, fanfic: strangers

Comments 28

pinkporca March 21 2012, 18:40:28 UTC

Beautifully done. So sad though. Thank you for sharing.

aroruae March 21 2012, 22:59:53 UTC

Thanks for reading <3

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aroruae March 21 2012, 23:03:50 UTC

Kame admits that he's a coward because he knows he's just afraid to lose Jin, but he still takes advantage of every little second that he still had with Jin, waiting until their breakup is inevitable. He is also guilty for the way things ended up between them...

Hmm... I've thought about writing Jin's POV too, but only that. And I don't think I'll write even that as this story was started somewhere around a year ago xDD Don't know, I guess I'll see if I have time and inspiration ^^

Don't worry, I love long comments <3<3 So thank you!!

is_kazuchan March 21 2012, 22:31:41 UTC

sad n hurt..
n other way i want jin get notice how important kame in his life when kame leave or ignore him.. feel regret.
other part please..

aroruae March 21 2012, 23:05:36 UTC

Hmm... I don't really think I'll write it in another way as I had this ending in my head since the moment I started writing the story... I'll have to see if I'll also write Jin's POV though I really don't know about that.

Thanks for reading~~

abyssinian13 March 22 2012, 03:07:48 UTC

last line summed up the story..so sad..but beautifully written..thanks for sharing..

aroruae March 22 2012, 08:08:46 UTC

Thanks <3 I had that line in my head since I wrote the first word for this story *laughs*

romapi March 22 2012, 05:49:24 UTC

It was so sad for Kazu, you made me cry. I like to whack Jin head for doing it to him but Kazu have partly have to be blame.

can you make it a happy ending?

thanks for sharing.

aroruae March 22 2012, 08:10:50 UTC

They are both to blame, Jin for cheating on him and Kazuya for not being able to take a decision and breakup with him T___T Sorry, but I had this ending in my head since the moment I started writing, so I don't really think I'll change it... Besides, it seems more real like this, doesn't it? xDD

Thanks for your comment <3

romapi March 22 2012, 08:17:59 UTC

hai that okay.