FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 19

[artemisrae]

 Title: Follow Through
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 19. An ancient game of virgin sacrifice
Pairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: Ehhh. I think it’s okay with T, but let’s go with M (for not particularly graphic awkward virgin sex) just to be safe?
Summary: And the first they slept together - that had been the most embarrassing.
Notes: Second of three

Comments

[evil_little_dog]

*glee* You wrote the first time story! *dances dances* Yayness!

And awwww, for poor, miserable Ed and Winry taking charge and just, awwwww.

[artemisrae]

Please note that I am terrible embarrassed and juxtaposie pretty much had to strong arm me into actually posting it.

That being said, I'm happy you enjoyed it.

[evil_little_dog]

I did, very, very much. *uses Animaniacs icon in glee*

[sabssmith]

Dear god, I love this first time shot!

Writers these days scramble up a first-time sex story as though it's a flawless exertion of passion, but this is realistic. Solid but nicely real. It does allow you to connect with Ed and Winry and recognize a sort of...humanity. :3 -nod nod-

Please do write moar soon. xD

[artemisrae]

Thank you! I'm really happy with the positive response - I know it's not a typical sex story but... I didn't intend to write that? I don't know, I have no problem with smut - hell I've written some myself - but I do have issues with amazing orgasmic virgin smut. I've never heard of it happening for real, so it always takes me out of the story.

[noble_scarlet]

Oh, my. How sweet. Very very sweet. I liked this a lot. :3

[artemisrae]

Thank you! I'm a sucker for Ed and Winry and fluff, what can I say?

[monique_27]

*lol* Oh that was so awesome! Funny and well written and in character and just so real. Poor kids. *cuddles them*

Winry merely shook her head and pressed her lips against his again. “Don’t talk this time, Ed.” <- *LOL* WINRY FOR THE WIN! >.

[artemisrae]

That's a wonderful compliment, because that's exactly what I wanted! Thank you!

[ear145]

Naturally, he’d read up on the subject.

*facepalm*

That's so very Ed. XD

[artemisrae]

OF COURSE HE WOULD. If Edward Elric is going to do something, he's going to do it RIGHT damnit, and where else would he find out the right way but from a book?