I'm not entirely sure whether or not I've commented on this yet, though I've been keeping up with it from the star. ^^; Anyhow, I just wanted to say this line: "I wish you joy in fucking my wife." and the way it's delivered? Sheer AWESOME. I wanted to cheer for Arthur. XD I love this chapter, and the way that Merlin and Arthur get closer, even if Merlin doesn't know it's Arthur yet.
Thanks so muchfor taking time to comment. It makes myfangirl day! I've been impatiently waiting to get to this chapter. I love the playful merlin Arthur connection. And I have abit of a thing for his mask and him trusting merlin enough to be vulnerable with it. Thanks for comment, you made me happy!
Ooh I got epic win! I had to reassure the slashers. People found Arthur/gwen heart breaking. Definately slash. And relationship development to come. I know how this ends butnot quite sure how many parts. Maybe 4, but I'm guessing.
Thanks so much for commenting. You have been my biggest support and cheerleader with this. Much appreciated!
No, never seen heroes. Is it worth watching? It's actually quite shocking that I haven't because I am a superhero geek normally!
Oh, never thought of spiderman kiss! This is weird, but I think what inspired me was that moment in Pretty Woman where she kisses him on the mouth for the first time. But, I can go with spiderman as that sounds way cooler!
Just got linked here from a rec. I don't do wip's this old but I read the first part before realising and then was so intrigued. So I thought screw it and read on.
This is good and was just really heating up. I love the 1984 vibe its such an interesting dystopia you have here.
I really hope that you come back to it, it seems such a shame to leave it here. I wont hold my breath but thanks for writing this much anyway :)
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Thanks so much for commenting. You have been my biggest support and cheerleader with this. Much appreciated!
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"Well, I see you took your role in looking after my assets seriously"
LOL!
You mixed the funny with the serious well.
Also, I like how you explained Arthur's 'powers.'
(Just a curiosity, have you ever watched Heroes?)
And...the 'Spiderman movie kiss'. :D
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Oh, never thought of spiderman kiss! This is weird, but I think what inspired me was that moment in Pretty Woman where she kisses him on the mouth for the first time. But, I can go with spiderman as that sounds way cooler!
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This is good and was just really heating up. I love the 1984 vibe its such an interesting dystopia you have here.
I really hope that you come back to it, it seems such a shame to leave it here. I wont hold my breath but thanks for writing this much anyway :)
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