Pretty Baby

Jun 10, 2009 12:15



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tintop_lizzy June 11 2009, 03:11:22 UTC
I laughed, I remembered birthing and I remembered actually having a male midwife. I liked the story, enjoyed embarrases Merlin and thankyou for writing an AU that is so ...

BTW, I memm thisalso.

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arthur_angel June 12 2009, 20:54:33 UTC
O yippee! Thanks so much. but you have me in suspense, "an AU that's so..." what?! And what do you mean by memm? (sorry, I'm new to livejournal!)

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tintop_lizzy June 12 2009, 21:21:05 UTC
OK, fair comment, welcome to LJ.

AU description word: evocative, sweeping, innovative, well-written, funny, daring, deconstructive, in-character.

Couldn't choose they were all true.

Memm= put an address for this page/story into my own personal journal for later repeat reading, usual a symbol or word next to the top or bottom of the entry. Shortened from word memories or memorise.

By the way, keep writing in this hospital AU, it works brilliantly!

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arthur_angel June 12 2009, 21:30:32 UTC
You are to kind. And have just made me extremely happy. I was working at said hospital last night and was planning to go to bed, but now I just have to start writing fic again. Is all your fault if I fall asleep on my keyboard!

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ravencostello June 11 2009, 08:55:52 UTC
Not to nitpick, but there are lots of typos, especially towards the end of the fic. It should be pretty easy to spot and correct them, though, so no worries.

Great fic! I found the way the other midwives mollycoddled Merlin both humorous and adorable, and I especially loved Arthur fainting!

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arthur_angel June 12 2009, 20:52:17 UTC
I know! You shame me. I wrote it just before going on night shifts and couldn't be arsed to proof read it. Really embarrassing because I'm usually really anally retentative about poor spelling.

Will check it now. Thanks for the great con crit!

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blaidd_drwg June 11 2009, 15:25:55 UTC
This line had me burst out in laughter. ::::
"Oh and Merlin, clean it the old fashioned way, no magic. Your magic cleaning methods sent the placentas to the instrument cleaning room instead of the furnace. They were not amused to be sent organs to clean!"

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arthur_angel June 12 2009, 20:45:10 UTC
O thanx! Believe it or not though, that has actually happened at work, where some doofus kept sending placentas of in the instrument trolley!thanx for reading and commenting

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