Perspective, anyone?

[artificialgekko]

Alright, so I want to finally get my ass up and not only just draw a little more but *improve* on what I do, so I'm tinkering around with weird perspective

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[razerz]

"Oh no, they are listening to drum and bass and razerz won't let him use her scanner" D:!

[artificialgekko]

And she makes me do the dishes all the time... ;;

[feanarth]

Bad kitty! BAD! NO! NO DnB! D:

That's it, man! Game over, man! Game over!

[rev_redbone]

I'm no artist, but I think I understand the perspective you're going for. Have you tried searching for screenshots from Aliens, or shots of similar perspective to compare your idea with?

I can imagine the attack coming from the left side of the image, maybe coming down a corridor. The only advice I could offer is the obvious; the bigger you draw the attacker, the closer she appears/smaller you appear.