Man of Beauty Gone Bad

[artsmystery]

I wrote this just now, basically off the top of my head so there are probably several mistakes, but hey, i was just writing what came to mind. Have a great day

Comments

[theskiesble3d]

i really like that a lot.
♥

[queen_of_kings]

Very nice! Thought provoking yet so real and true. You never cease to amaze me :) I love you!

[underanumbrella]

Tres Milton-esque.
Great imagery, phrasing, and language. I would like to hear you read it - to hear the rhythm and to catch all of the internal rhymes.

dooddeededeedddee

[rykerjames]

hey buddie.... um ive been thinking about the whole the new ending thing...and i really just can't go through with living in wherever they live... blain and james have been all over me about it... but its just not enough time to make a decision like that........ but i love you anywho...

[thebleedingrose]

ha...i understand why you wanted me to do this one...it is gorgeous. thanks for everything in class..love you dearly abby.

ruby