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ashbear02

Brick by Brick part 1

Mar 02, 2010 19:49

Title: Brick by Brick 1/?
Fandom: NCIS
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1751
Warnings: major angst
Authors Note: ok, so about a month ago I wrote Reactions, which was an angsty little number about Tony seeing Gibbs kiss The ELB. I had more than one person ask for a follow up to "fix it". So...I wrote and I erased...and I wrote it again....and ended up erasing ( Read more... )

gibbs/tony, ncis, brick by brick

Comments 32

twilightseeker3 March 3 2010, 03:22:55 UTC

Great ...I can't wait to see Gibb's approach. I hope Tony makes him work very hard first.

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 05:23:52 UTC

Tony will make him work exceedingly hard, and not just at first. For a long while. Because Gibbs might be awesome, but Tony is too. =] Happy you like it! =D

twilightseeker3 March 3 2010, 11:39:47 UTC

He most certainly IS.

chloebroefan March 3 2010, 03:39:53 UTC

Excellent sequel, I love everyone's voice, but Fornell nailed it! Loved "Yeah, 'Shit' is about right! You cheated on DiNozzo with that hag.” Sing it baby!

Am I the only one who wants a strange (stranger to Gibbs I mean) no make that a really, really hot stranger to answer Tony's door? Why is Gibbs the only one with opportunities...extra points if Tony thinks s/he's 'just a friend' but Jethro can tell s/he wants more. Our kicked puppy is still a damned hawt Tony, so I'd like there to be some face saving/competition aspect maybe, because you just know there are people out there just waiting-out this Tony and his crush thing.

Sorry about that, my bunnies were jumping. You write whatever you want, this is excellent so far. Thank you for sharing, I'm off for a second read!

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 06:04:37 UTC

I don't think that's exactly what will happen, but you're on the right track! =D Glad you're enjoying.

psyko_kittie March 3 2010, 03:40:39 UTC

o_0 The angst...the angst. I need more of this and quickly. Brilliant first chapter.

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 06:07:52 UTC

Thanks! =D More will be soon!

colordrone March 3 2010, 05:08:31 UTC

the very good news: the punch it packs the second time 'round is as brutal as the punch packed the first time. the very bad news: now we want more. :)

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 06:08:22 UTC

Thanks hun. =3

murgy31 March 3 2010, 06:01:25 UTC

This was amazing! I can't wait for more.... :)

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 06:08:08 UTC

Thanks! =D