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ashbear02

Brick by Brick part 1

Mar 02, 2010 19:49

Title: Brick by Brick 1/?
Fandom: NCIS
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1751
Warnings: major angst
Authors Note: ok, so about a month ago I wrote Reactions, which was an angsty little number about Tony seeing Gibbs kiss The ELB. I had more than one person ask for a follow up to "fix it". So...I wrote and I erased...and I wrote it again....and ended up erasing ( Read more... )

gibbs/tony, ncis, brick by brick

Comments 32

batina35 March 3 2010, 08:56:08 UTC

Love this continuation. Can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Tony!

ksl2025 March 3 2010, 11:53:34 UTC

You know...part of me doesn't actually want Tony to take Gibbs back. I mean, seriously, how do you forgive and forget such a blatant betrayal? Even if he can forgive it he's not going to forget that Gibbs went for the nasty lawyer---not once but repeatedly. And the lock on the door kept Tony at bay, but not the lawyer. That, that makes me want to see the man have to grovel, to work to regain what he so callously threw away.

I am looking forward to more, regardless of which way you go with it.

weird_fin March 3 2010, 12:14:59 UTC

That was great.

nightingale_29 March 3 2010, 18:45:21 UTC

Yay a sequel I like Abby throwing toys at him but I do hope Bert didn't get hurt if he was one of them hehe.
I've just watched Mothers Day where SHE cropped up again she really needs to be burned at the stake *shudders* hope you can update soon.

j_dlovr465 March 3 2010, 19:08:37 UTC

I have to say that you did an excellent job of getting in Gibbs' head in this chapter. I love seeing that Ducky is most definitely in Tony's corner in this and that even Gibbs-loving Abby is not thrilled with his treatment of Tony. Have to say that Fornell's reaction was classic. I loved it. Can't wait for your next chapter.