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ashbear02

Brick by Brick part 1

Mar 02, 2010 19:49

Title: Brick by Brick 1/?
Fandom: NCIS
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1751
Warnings: major angst
Authors Note: ok, so about a month ago I wrote Reactions, which was an angsty little number about Tony seeing Gibbs kiss The ELB. I had more than one person ask for a follow up to "fix it". So...I wrote and I erased...and I wrote it again....and ended up erasing ( Read more... )

gibbs/tony, ncis, brick by brick

Comments 32

green99 March 4 2010, 02:06:34 UTC

Just love this story, the whole premise of a loved one cheating has always stricken a chord with me. It's just such a betrayal when they betray you on that level. The journey from heart break to moving forward is so poignant. Thank you so much for sharing your writing, just wonderful to read!! :0)

felmyst March 4 2010, 11:36:45 UTC

YAY! start of the fix it...I hope p2 is coming soon....

starbuckssue March 5 2010, 19:22:32 UTC

Oh I am so glad to see you continue this! This won't be easy as Tony has been deeply hurt by this but I so hope that Gibbs manages to fix it. Excellent chapter.

laura_trekkie March 6 2010, 18:49:36 UTC

Wow, that's one unpleasant 'lady'. What the hell was Gibbs thinking?

I'm glad that Gibbs has talked about this with so many people- that must be a first for him- but, crucially, none of them were the person he needed to talk to most. Now comes the moment of truth: what will Tony say? Will he even give Gibbs the time of day?

Laura.

prometheustorch July 16 2010, 00:37:57 UTC

Thanks soo much for fixing it! Awesome start!! (Quick question, just what does ELB stand for?)

ashbear02 July 16 2010, 01:31:15 UTC

Thanks! I hope you like the rest!

(Well It stands for many things but to me it's Evil Lawyer Bitch; 'cause I hate her)