Slow Burn

May 23, 2009 14:17

Title : Slow Burn ( Read more... )

one-shot, slow burn

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domixdani May 23 2009, 07:22:14 UTC
Wow, that was amazing.

I honestly don't know what to say. But I definitely know how Kame is feeling. That feeling is not fun at all.

This was really well written. <333 MORE xD

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ashesof_hope May 23 2009, 08:41:14 UTC
Kame just has a hard time making a decision. Glad u relate to Kame. Thanks for reading. :))

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aarime May 23 2009, 08:15:46 UTC
Wow ..i missed your fanfics and u are back ! Okaerii!!!

I can understand Kame's feeling...but i still have hope for Jin and Kame .. it seems they love each other but again loving each other sometimes isnt enough :(

Keep it up
i want MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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ashesof_hope May 23 2009, 08:41:57 UTC
feels good to be back? XDD I think Jin and Kame have plenty of history together, and it's something that works in their favor. Thank u for reading! <3

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zsuness May 23 2009, 08:21:00 UTC
Ash. ♥ idek what to say. Once again, you aced at manipulating the hell out of my emo. :( My heart sort of breaks for Jin and Kame but is rather hopeful for Ryo and Kame. *sighs* Damnit, I missed this. I think I'm gonna reread this and come back with a more coherent comment when I'm not so :( faced for Kame.

Wait, this:
The funny thing was how Ryo kissed him, like he wasn't his for the taking, as though Kame might actually change his mind.
And Ryo's understanding of the meaning of the cigarette.. actually the whole cigarette/Jin/Kame's inability to let go parallel worked so well.

"Nobody." Jin. tsk. :/

Kame's "just in case" list and the half assed/fail!quitting. :/ I'm glad you made it like this. I wonder wether Kame's "I'll start quitting. Today." was a promise or a decision.. I hope he really did cut that thread for his own sake. lol I'm being all emo for fic!Kame. See what you're doing to me? :( XD

I need a Ryo, too.

...and I forgot to say how very fitting this title is.

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we all need a Ryo in our life ashesof_hope May 23 2009, 08:38:50 UTC
Allo. How was the ML of 1582? Did u download the 900M version 0___0?

I dunnoe, I've been wanting to write a RyoKameJin fic for some time.

And Ryo's understanding of the meaning of the cigarette.. actually the whole cigarette/Jin/Kame's inability to let go parallel worked so well.

Yay, so glad u picked up on this. The cigs are like smth Kame can't bear to throw away, even if he knows there's no use for it. I think....it's a decison, or at least at that time Kame meant it to be a decision. Who knows tho. Maybe I should write a following chapter to this one and torture the three of them further. XDDD *is Do-S when it comes to fic character*



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Re: we all need a Ryo in our life zsuness May 23 2009, 09:05:14 UTC
I try to refrain for crying over the quality (I mean it's 900MB and I was expecting something like the 700MB clip) and that we can't even see Kame's face properly because sljkfhasfhla it has the drum/water/dance thing and that I haven't seen before, so. alskfhla. Thanks again, Ash. No one ever got back to me with links from the request thread, so. <3

I'm glad you decided to finish this, then. Not that I wouldn't mind reading the follow up because I feel like you (or well.. Kame) didn't give a sure answer in the end.. Not that it's needed.. I guess that's how it is in real life, too. I assume he will be reminded of Jin years after this just by a scent or a word or a familiar something.. I wouldn't know, but I think it is how it is with addictions/habits. Especially since I sense Jin isn't indifferent, either ( ... )

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Re: we all need a Ryo in our life ashesof_hope May 23 2009, 12:13:03 UTC
I see u are worrying over fic!Ryo, Kame and Jin. XDDD Idk, if I ever write it, it prob still won't end on a positive note. Love triangles never end happily.

he will be reminded of Jin years after this just by a scent or a word or a familiar something

That sounds....beautiful and kinda sad. ): Thanks for commenting. ^__^

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eragon22 May 23 2009, 08:32:35 UTC
Your Ryokame is always so painful yet so beautiful. Not many people manage to pull off Ryokame, but you accomplish it with such elegance and ease.

You should write more? XD *dares to poke a little*

Anyways, i´ll be looking forward to reading more from you in the future. Thank you so much for his oneshot. I loved it ♥♥

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ashesof_hope May 23 2009, 08:40:14 UTC
RyoKame just seem special to me, I like how their character seem to be quite opposite but prob will fit well together.

Haha, I would try. This is prob just to test the waters. Thank u for commenting. :DDD

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sumomo_yuki May 23 2009, 08:36:54 UTC
Jin you asked for it, you said he was nobody anyway, nice one ash!

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