[SJ Fic] How To Make Me Love You Unconditionally

[asisharada]

How To Make Me Love You Unconditionally: Kyuhyun/Sungmin, ninja!Donghae/Kyuhyun (2115 words)

(1. Enter the dorm with a smile that doesn't reach your eyes.) It's just sixteen simple steps, with fifteen roads to heartbreak. Kyuhyun and Sungmin need their own K-drama. Seriously.

(now with a vietnamese translation!)

Comments

[paradigm_twist]

Spot ^^

[paradigm_twist]

You really know how to make use of your time xD But yes. Take out all your angst on Kyumin. That's always a fantastic idea :D I like your experimentation with this writing style. It's interesting. A little bit disorientating at first, but very precise once you understand it ^^

But dude. How the heck did you managed to kill the wife in less than a year? ;A; I like how you wrote Kyumin here. Kyuhyun is a selfish coward, but sad and lonely :/ Min is just this spectator who does nothing but watch and bring pain to himself. Both are idiots. Which is why I love them <3

TRUST DONGHAE TO MAKE AN APPEARANCE 8D But who wouldn't fall for Donghae anyway? Everyone in the SJ fandom would have fallen a little in love with Donghae at some point. It's inevitable.

SJ's on holiday! TuekHae just ended theirs. 3 days in Saipan is too short D: Hyuk is in Prague but I'm sure you already know that. Fan accounts are amazing like that. Kyu is in Spain Dude have you heard his new solo? It's so heartbreakingly beautiful ;A;. I swear, that boy just attracts

[asisharada]

Aaw man. I knew it would be super confusing and disoriented. Which is why I basically outlined the plot.

Haha, I actually rewrote the first half like twice. Because my writing didn't mesh with the later half of the story. That might be why it gets easier later on. It took me a good while to figure out how the heck to write like this. Which is why the first half may go around in circles.

As for the wife. I DON'T KNOW OKAY. Like it was meant to be after a whole year right, but then it was like. I didn't want to make Sungmin and Kyuhyun too old. So I just rushed her death.

Donghae bias is too strong. If anyone is making a cameo. It is Hae bb.

Man. Why is Kyuhyun even there alone? Eeesh boy. Get some friends. And I did hear his solo-- not my kind of song. But it was very pretty :) it was actually what inspired this .I kept thinking of Kyu's future solo career and yeah...

[paradigm_twist]

Dude. I totally skipped reading your white text plot xD I already understood it from 2 onwards. I just needed to reread 1 to make sure that I was deluding myself into thinking I'm reading from Kyuhyun's POV because you know, Kyuhyun does that to people

More like OT3 bias is too strong LMAO

Kyuhyun travels alone a lot. He went to Italy first. He spent almost 2 weeks in Japan by himself >< He's too independent for his own good.

[pinklunacy]

This is absolutely perfect.
I usually don't go for second person narration but it didn't bother me at all in this fic. The story flows beautifully and the whole thing is bittersweet and heartbreaking and just.so.fucking.perfect <3

Thanks for sharing ♥

[asisharada]

Yay. I'm so glad you thought it flowed. That was my biggest beef with this, I thought it was really convoluted. :/ but I'm really glad you liked it :)

Thanks for commenting :D

[namikaze_jkc]

<3 <3 <3
^ That would be me flailing over this. :D I can't really comment properly. Again But it is just so pretty IDEK.. all the makings of a kdrama right there!

And shit is right! Poor bb..

[asisharada]

Haha. Thank you! Omg. I stuck the pictures in for the purpose of fooling people that it was pretty. Har har har.

Aah. Kyuhyun. Does he like bring trouble to him >.

[alicial0ve]

ANGST FICS, I like. Haven't read one in like many many days.. Was really deprived for one hehe. Tbh I got quite a little confused at the start.. But as I proceeded, I understood better. (Maybe my understanding fail LOL idk)

Anyway, beautifully written! Really loved the way you wrote it omggg. orz Kyuhyun's a pabo when it comes to Min.. Wanted to throw a shoe at his head when he hurt Min soooo much :<

Very, very, heartbreaking. But I love the ending. And thanks for writing! :D

(orz I should start improving my grammar)

[asisharada]

Haha, no it's not you. I think everyone is getting disorientated by the beginning. OTL. But I'm glad it got clearer as it went along :)

Omg. I have this weird fetish for when Kyuhyun and Sungmin are super dysfunctional and awkward. Idek. >.< translates into all of my fics.

Your grammar is cool! Thanks for commenting :)

[asisharada]

All yours :)

[asisharada]

omg. It seems all I can write nowadays is angst. And kyumin. I'm incapable of writing anything else. Gah. Will write something with actual writing and plot one day ): and no more fancy shmancy writing.

thank you for the kind comment :D I'm glad there was actually flow. Hehe. Love love love.