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Beautiful Thing: Chapter Eight

Jul 31, 2009 19:34

Story: Beautiful Thing

Chapter Eight: Day At The Museum

Characters: Albus Severus/Scorpius

Rating: PG-13ish

Word Count: ~1600

Prompts used: All of them :D

Warnings: Boys more-or-less kissing, nostalgia, seagulls

Summary: A day of museums, and magic, and a killer seagull or two.

Notes: Heh, shorter than usual :)

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rating: pg-13, fic

Comments 8

mysecretashes August 1 2009, 04:13:29 UTC

So close!! And I thought it was really sweet how Al kept the sketch. :)

mayberry_rose August 1 2009, 22:53:37 UTC

And yet so far :P
Thank you very much :)

kingzgurl August 1 2009, 22:23:03 UTC

You're a tease. Has anyone ever told you that?

I still love Scorpius taking care of Al, and this was another fantastic chapter.

mayberry_rose August 1 2009, 22:54:09 UTC

Lol, maybe once or twice ;D

Thank you so much :D

asnowyowl August 2 2009, 02:01:39 UTC

So nice! I'm glad Al found and kept the sketch. And damn, they were so close to that kiss! *pouts*

Another lovely chapter, can't wait for the next.

mayberry_rose August 2 2009, 22:58:22 UTC

Aw, thank you :D

Should be coming up early this week!

phys_nut August 2 2009, 16:21:43 UTC

argh!! i feel so torn: on the one hand that kid was so cute with her whispering, but at the same time she interrupted the moment, noooo!! there must be more kissing, they can't exactly pretend like they're just friends now, right?? love the chapter, the boys are ridiculously and wonderfully sweet together, i cannot get enough of them!

mayberry_rose August 2 2009, 23:00:06 UTC

No, I think you're right - they're both reaching the very limits of denial now :)

Thank you so much! Lol, I thought that there were four weeks after this one rather than two, so they may be coming to their senses sooner than expected :D