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Fic: Anything

Aug 07, 2009 18:33

Title: Anything
Summary: Albus will do whatever it takes to protect Scorpius.
Word Count: 3219
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Non-Magic AU
Warnings: Mentions of abuse, background character death.
Prompts: Person: Remus Lupin; Place: A Zoo; Object one: Leash/Collar; Object two: Saddle; Food: Animal Crackers; Emotion: Predatory; Quote: Samuel Butler
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Comments 17

forest_rose August 7 2009, 23:18:31 UTC

Oooooh! I do like this! I'm not normally one for next-gen fics, but this was gorgeous and so powerful. Yay for protective!Albus! I'm so glad Scorpius is going to be safe with him :-) xxx

mysecretashes August 8 2009, 14:37:19 UTC

It is now my goal to convince you of the wonderfulness that is next-gen. So much potential!

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it! :D

asnowyowl August 7 2009, 23:39:14 UTC

I'm so glad Sorpius has Al. How awful about Scorp's situation.

The sex scene with the leash was smoking hot! And I loved the references to Sirius and Remus.

Yay for Harry and Ginny taking Scorpius in.

But with Al and that gun, I worry that if things don't go the way he wants with Scorpius he might do something rash.

And I was so glad to see a non-magic AU!! Love it!

mysecretashes August 8 2009, 14:54:58 UTC

I know, I was so mean to Scorpius. :( But at least I gave him Al. :)

'Leash/Collar' always sends my brain to the gutter, so I couldn't resist. :D And in my mind Sirius is automatically included with Remus, so I had to. :D

Yeah, Harry and Ginny were awesome here.

About Al and the gun - I think that's what pushes it just over the line into 'dark'. I honestly don't think he'd ever hurt Scorpius, but we don't really know. I think he was like that with Lucius because the man had hurt Scorpius so much. I don't think that Al would be careless or ruthless with anybody that he truly loved.

I adore AUs!!

ladyannikaa August 8 2009, 02:58:44 UTC

... wow, brilliant job!

mysecretashes August 8 2009, 14:55:34 UTC

Thank you! :D

kingzgurl August 8 2009, 09:47:56 UTC

Protective!Albus makes me swoon! Poor Scorpius :(
Glad it's all better, though. This was brilliant.

mysecretashes August 8 2009, 14:58:12 UTC

Me too! :D

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

phys_nut August 8 2009, 12:18:21 UTC

wowza! hot, dark, angsty and protective al, love love love!!! you shouldn't be afraid about posting this at all, it's brilliant!!

mysecretashes August 8 2009, 15:00:26 UTC

Thank you, that makes me feel better! I've never written anything like this before. I'm really glad you liked it!

phys_nut August 10 2009, 15:11:47 UTC

well you did a really good job! also, i have to add that the way you translated sirius' death to him falling out a window made me laugh so much. i've always hated how he died in the books, so this just seemed hilarious as the muggle equivalent! (though of course death isn't funny.....hehe)