Beautiful Thing: Chapter Ten

Aug 12, 2009 20:51


Story; Beautiful Thing
Chapter Ten: To The End
Author: mayberry_rose
Characters: Albus Severus/Scorpius, Remus/Sirius (yes, they both still get to be alive)
Prompts used: All of them :)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~2500
Summary: And to the end of the story, and all the new beginnings.
Warnings: Boy-love, boys kissing, boys cuddling... You get the picture ;)
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food: pop rocks, emotion: anger, song: cher, object: lighting, fic, song: rickey martin, object: fireworks, person: fred weasley, place: charms classroom, quote: han solo, freeform: wizarding duel

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asnowyowl August 12 2009, 19:49:51 UTC
Yes, it certainly is a beautiful thing. This was lovely from start to finish. You took us on a literal and emotional journey that was very satisfying.

I love Al's confusion about friends kissing and how he just went with the flow once he figured it out. I also adored the scene at the end and can just imagine them facing each other on the bench, kissing and declaring thier love.

Great job! (now I'm sad it's over)

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mayberry_rose August 17 2009, 22:42:54 UTC
Aw, thank you very much indeed :D

Yup, I adore Al clueless... And thanks, I loved the image of that scene - makes me wish I could draw!

Lol, me too :( But it was certainly fun while it lasted! Thank you for your lovely reviews throughout.

*huggles*

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phoenix_xd August 13 2009, 00:18:38 UTC
oh, that was lovely!
i love al, naming all the couples that he thought were "just friends."
and then him saying it didn't count because he always loved scorpius :D

and that was a lovely ending.
it was a beautiful thing :)

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mayberry_rose August 17 2009, 22:47:02 UTC
Thank you!
Heh, I love Al in this fic - he turned out to be such a sweetheart :)

Aw, thank you very much indeed, and thanks for all your lovely reviews :D

*big hugs*

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kingzgurl August 13 2009, 02:47:17 UTC
awwwwwww <3

this was absolutely wonderful and adorable. i loved scorpius getting worried, but then being okay because al just doesn't understand social interactions. lol. this has been a wonderful story, and i'm sad to see it end.

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mayberry_rose August 17 2009, 22:51:46 UTC
Thank you!

Heh, I am too :( But it was great fun while it lasted! Thank you very much for your reviews, they really made me smile :D

*huggles*

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phys_nut August 13 2009, 16:56:26 UTC
oh.my.god. this was just beautiful. i'm nearly choking up with emotion, words cannot describe it. you wrote a gorgeous story so full of emotional and the last line and everything was just wonderful! brilliant brilliant job, i'm sad it's over but i've got the warm fuzzies from it, so it's all good! :D

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mayberry_rose August 17 2009, 22:59:00 UTC
Aw *hugs you lots*

Thank you so, so much :D I'm glad you got warm fuzzies!

Also... Thank you so, so much for your amazing reviews throughout, they always brightened up my day :D

*huggles*

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mysecretashes August 14 2009, 18:07:22 UTC
Oh, Al. ♥ Thank goodness Scorpius understood his social inadequecies. :D I loved this fic from start to finish (especially the last two chapters) and I am both sad to see it over and happy to see them finally together! :D

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mayberry_rose August 17 2009, 22:54:59 UTC
Aw, thank you! Yup, Scorpius understands :D

Thank you very much - I'm also strangely sad to see this one end :( Thank you for all the lovely reviews!

*squishes*

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