scissors and dirt. re: akame.
scissors and dirt.
akame. (with yamapi, tegoshi, shige, ryo, koichi, nagase appearance.)
1,862 words.
6½ pages.
soundtrack: assorted. some dark instrumentals.
( “It’s for safety.” Pi said, signaling with two of his fingers pressed tightly together into a single bar. “You wouldn’t want people under the influence of anything other than sexual motivation.” )
akame. (with yamapi, tegoshi, shige, ryo, koichi, nagase appearance.)
1,862 words.
6½ pages.
soundtrack: assorted. some dark instrumentals.
( “It’s for safety.” Pi said, signaling with two of his fingers pressed tightly together into a single bar. “You wouldn’t want people under the influence of anything other than sexual motivation.” )
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like my heart has been shaved bare like Kame's head
Kame's going to lose all his fans now, as he's predicted.
This felt like consummation, more than all those times they've had sex. Interesting.
I love delicate Kame. *Kazuya*
Wait, wait.
curtain of his warm, dark hair, smelling lightly of shampoo and identity
...This seems to imply that Kame lost his identity with his hair D:
Very beautiful <3
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...This seems to imply that Kame lost his identity with his hair D:
This is true! At least, that's what was implied. As a female, I can only imagine how horrible it would be to lose all of my hair, all of that substance and evidence and "proof" and identity as being of the female gender. I can only imagine how it would feel if it was your career and the reason peopled liked you nestled in there, too. /personal observation!
Thank you, very very much. ♥ ♥
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huuu. I find the implications of this act on their relationship really romantic ♥_♥
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That's interesting, though I agree. I kind of intended for it to be very...sad? melancholy? at the end, but by the time I got there Kame's hurt at losing identity → losing identity at hands of jin → finding identity → identity is relationship with jin. It's phenomenal, because that's exactly what happened in real life - this beautiful model gives all of her trust to her boyfriend to do absolute anything, whip her senseless, whatever (without harming her too badly, of course) - and he breaks her, completely, without even touching her. The hair was nothing but it represented absolutely everything to her, as a human being.
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APPLAUSE lgkajslkdjas APPLAUSE!!!!!!!!!!111-- kicked
“You can do anything you want.” Pi murmured, rubbing his bottom lip with his thumb. “No safe words. No contracts. No negotiated limits. Absolute and complete power.”
........ how much research into BDSM did you have to do for this fic
It’s all about trust, he said to Jin half an hour earlier. And I trust you, Jin. I want you to make me feel it, if this is what you like. Hurt me.
T_____________________T my lip is already quivering. cries.
Snip.
SCREAMS GKLjdshkajslkdj AGLKJSDlkajlsjd NOOOOOO JIN ANYTHING BUT THAT SKGJlashjas YOU HUGE BRUTE ;___;!
Tremendous, monstrous, standing ovation; and Jin’s body racked with sobs for what he had done to his pretty little flower, who had quieted now, shivering softly in a beautiful, ecstatic endorphin high.asdkljsa you write so beautifully. idek. I. gklhkajksj. I. so I hear ( ... )
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I laughed out loud very, very obnoxiously at the reaction you had to the "snip". Jin is not being a brute! He is just trying to get Kame horny, basically! And to own him! ..Even though he basically does already!
Bumblebees is a bit tough, not much inspiration and I am contemplating rewriting the entire thing very, very much. I am a perfectionist for fic and if Chapter 1 took me...what, 4 months? *cries* ♥
Thank you thank you thank you! I really was convinced it was terrible and poorly written. I am glad you liked it despite its creep and shortness. ♥ ♥ ♥
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This is not a story to read before bedtime. Everything after the last page break is just... bitter, heartwrenching tears. It hurts, it just hurts. It's exquisitely written--especially at the end, and breathtakingly so, but--
Such drastic action... it's powerful. Power sweetened by the immense trust and love evident between Kame and Jin.
The images are painted so vividly in my mind, but I don't want to see them; Jin massacring Kame's sense of self, Kame placing utmost trust into Jin's hands... The finale.
There's nothing more to say. (the rest is silence)
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I am terribly sorry it made you cry and hurt and ache but I am incredibly, unbelievably flattered and ecstatic that it hit you that hard, being it's just words and all.
It's an absolutely frightening image. I sat through an hour lecture about BDSM - whips, chains, crops, slaves, bruises, blood, you name it - and only when this story was told did everybody in the room literally begin to cry in completely shock. It's just that powerful. And the relationship between Kame and Jin: how Kame trusts Jin so much not just to let him do it but to know it'd be okay afterwards, too. He's not just defined by Kamenashi Kazuya anymore, he's as much (if not more) defined by that part of him that belongs to Akanishi Jin, too.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the absolutely beautiful comment. ♥ Please, by all means, charge me for the kleenex debt.
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it.
wow.
i'm at a loss for words.
(20 minutes later)
I couldn't help myself. I started reading Bumblebees.
You = AMAZING WRITER
AKAME = perfect pleasure-pain couple.
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♥ ♥ ♥ I am flattered, flattered, flattered and I am glad you enjoyed it (and bumblebees!) so much. Thank you again for reading! ♥
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such a different take on akame!
and i'm going to (sort of) second naruchu and say delicate kame is love.
please to write more like this? :D
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It's refreshing to write Akame in situations other than "oh hi jin, you're back, i'm sad, please hold me, *makeup sex*, ilu jin ♥ *soulmates*" and still come out with a mostly fulfilling and somewhat realistic, appropriate end.
More BDSM fic or more fragile!eternallove!notclichestoryline!akame? The former: no idea where else I could take BDSM hahah; the latter: most definitely. (:
Thank you so much for reading! ♥ Glad you enjoyed.
Shhhh, let's just pretend that account mix-up never happened. ♥
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