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athosiangirl

Stages of Love Challenge: Attraction

Mar 28, 2006 16:48

Okay John/Teyla Stages of Love: Attraction

Title: A Losing Battle
Rated: G
Words: 300+
Spoilers: Vague mentioning of Season 1: 'Suspicion'

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Comments 7

Great! cblade_007 March 29 2006, 04:20:30 UTC

That was wonderful. Great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

Re: Great! athosiangirl March 29 2006, 19:04:15 UTC

Glad you liked Witchy...not quite what I wanted...it was suppose to be longer but I ran out of time...My puppy is taking up quite a bit of my time so I wrote this in my Anthropology class the day it was due...

I have now edited it for spelling errors...

Next chapter should be easier!

LOL, I love it anonymous March 29 2006, 20:38:00 UTC

Wonderful!!

~Cpt. Ritter

ceekaysheppard March 29 2006, 22:10:24 UTC

That was really sweet - I liked the way you got into John's head. And the last few lines were particularly good. :D

doxymom March 29 2006, 22:40:21 UTC

Very sweet. I loved it! Well done. I love how you pieced together the little things over the past two years and built them into his realization.

Well done!

Attraction J/T fic jeyla4ever March 30 2006, 01:26:51 UTC

Oh, AG..I love it...this is beautiful..I can certainly see John doing this at the end of Conversion when they had that chat in the sparring room...him struggling with the thought that he just might be falling in love with Teyla..beautiful, just beautiful..

Camy