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[athousandsmiles]

Author: athousandsmiles
Title: Pearl's House 4/10
Rating: Now rated M to be safe
Genre: angst, romance, au, supernatural
Summary: Cameron tried to shake off the feeling of being watched and made quick work of searching the place for anything unusual. Problem was, everything there was unusual.
A/N: Written for the weekly challenge at hughvillefics for the prompt New Year's

Comments

[pyewacket_1975]

Ok..that's not scary at all *shudders*

Loved the smex though :) That was awesome. Can't wait to see what happens when they get back to PPTH.

[athousandsmiles]

I hadn't originally meant for them to have sex, but... I think it works better. If House thinks he's imagining all of this, then there's no reason he wouldn't go for it. lol Thanks.

[sharp2799]

*glances around uneasily*

Lovely motel room scene but....

*shivers*

[athousandsmiles]

Ha! I didn't think that boat thing would have such an effect on the readers. Thanks. :D

[ally_cam]

Awesome chapter! It's getting more and more mysterious... *shudders* Love the motel scene, of course... well, who wouldn't &hearts

[meltzner]

hmm, ok you have got my curiosity..i am sure that there is more to come regarding the ghosts (House comforting Cameron yet again :)

plse don't keep us in suspense for too long....

[athousandsmiles]

I'm hoping to update again tonight. We'll see. Thanks. :D

[athousandsmiles]

Thanks so much. The motel scene was sort of spontaneous. I hadn't meant to include that originally.

[penybont]

Fantastic atmosphere you've created throughout, brooding and oppressive on the island; and it was more effective because it wasn't obviously terrifying - more psychologically troubling, if you understand me. The hotel scene was beautifully handled, with Cameron's insecurity and House's own brand of reassurance. The sex scene was perfect - 'he joined their bodies together' - I like that way of putting it, rather than too much unnecessary detail! The boat's reappearance has now added to the turmoil in their minds. Thanks for an engrossing read!

[athousandsmiles]

Thank you for such a lovely comment. Psychologically troubling is a good way of putting it. More to come soon.

[sam_doc]

Wow, I just read all 4 chapters (sorry for not doing that earlier) and I have to say, this is amazing!!
I love the world and the mood you are creating, I can feel the environment that they are in and the uneasiness they are experiencing! Brilliant writing, I'm anxiously waiting for more!!

[athousandsmiles]

Thanks and no worries about not reading it earlier; you're not required to read it at all. But I appreciate your comment. I hope to post more soon. &hearts

[sam_doc]

But it's a story from you, for me that is a must-read and a sure sign for a great story, so, nope, there is no excuse for not reading *lol* ;)