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Jan 04, 2011 21:42

Author: athousandsmiles
Title: Pearl's House 5/10
Rating: Now rated M to be safe
Genre: angst, romance, au, supernatural
Summary: Cameron tried to shake off the feeling of being watched and made quick work of searching the place for anything unusual. Problem was, everything there was unusual.
A/N: Written for the weekly challenge at hughvillefics for the prompt New Year's ( Read more... )

house/cameron, house, fanfiction

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hilandmum January 10 2011, 03:38:38 UTC
So we still have a mystery, but at least they're convinced they weren't hallucinating, plus they got to see each other naked again.

Another great chapter.

Mum

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 03:44:56 UTC
Thank you, Mum.

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sharp2799 January 10 2011, 04:18:57 UTC
This beat everything that was on TV tonight.

I love the way you weave humor into the serious (and creepy). The whole MRI scene was perfect--they traded quips, then House humming to her was such an intimate thing to do and then--Cameron's story caught me completely off-guard! LOL

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 05:01:26 UTC
It was kind of a bad TV night, wasn't it? Oh, and Cameron's story caught me completely off guard too. I swear this story has a mind of its own. But I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks. &hearts

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sharp2799 January 10 2011, 05:29:42 UTC
That is not what I meant! I meant your story is that good!

I'm also very glad you decided to extend it, chapter-wise. Anything shorter and it would have felt rushed. I'm much happier savoring.

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 18:28:16 UTC
I knew what you meant, but I had the TV on too and there was nothing that good on, IMO. ;) Mike and I ended up watching Cupcake Wars. (I'm impatiently waiting for the new season of The Amazing Race on Sunday nights.)

You're right, it would've been too rushed as it was before. This chapter started off as like three sentences, saying their test results were normal. lol I still think it's maybe a bit rushed, but better than it was before.

&hearts

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gerriv January 10 2011, 05:08:44 UTC
So the mystery continues! Nice chapter.

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 05:13:03 UTC
Thank you. :D

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ally_cam January 10 2011, 05:48:41 UTC
I'm starting to believe that there's something/someone wanting our heroes to be together - I agree on that :D

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 18:11:46 UTC
You mean besides us shippers? lol Yes, you may be right. Thanks for reading. :D

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mute_mime January 10 2011, 08:11:58 UTC
I have said this so many times: "Whuuuut?!"
Good thing, not bad. :)

Girl, this is an interesting story. I seriously want to know what the mess is going on.

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athousandsmiles January 10 2011, 18:13:49 UTC
That's a good reaction. I think House is having a similar response. :-p Thanks for reading.

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