Comments | athyestean: Eh, I try to write and this is all that comes out, but hasn't it been like forever?

athyestean

Eh, I try to write and this is all that comes out, but hasn't it been like forever?

Mar 28, 2007 23:09

Title: Last To Fall
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Sasuke (and Uchiha Mikoto)
Prompt: 047. Heart.
Word Count: 367 words
Rating: PG

Summary: He is blessed. He is cursed. He is an Uchiha.

A/N: I suddenly had the urge to write Mikoto. I wanted to give her a point of view rather than the blandness of canon. Bad Kishimoto! Bad!

Sasuke’s ( Read more... )

mikoto, sasuke and itachi, boredom, fanfic100, uchiha, fic

Comments 13

nayanroo March 29 2007, 03:17:06 UTC

...oh my, this is just beautiful. Tragic and beautiful.

I love the comparison of Mikoto's view and Fugaku's view on Itachi; put in the context of canon, that makes quite a bit of sense.

athyestean March 29 2007, 03:20:44 UTC

Really?! Oh my gosh thank you. I am so glad you think so.

Ooh, I am loving the Deidara icon. Are we going to see some ficcage soon?

nayanroo March 29 2007, 05:08:25 UTC

Hopefully! My writing journal has stuff on it but it's mostly smut. >>; And with Deidara, I don't know...I've been toying with a few things, but we'll see. 8D

hinthinticonhint

kajamiku March 29 2007, 16:03:35 UTC

I quite like it, it's short and sweet and sad and it's pulled off quite nicely. What more can you want? ^^

athyestean March 29 2007, 20:41:11 UTC

Thank you! That was just what I was trying for.

anonymous March 30 2007, 16:04:00 UTC

Short and sweet I liked it but I was wonder if you would be updating For Us like you said you would back in Feb?

athyestean March 31 2007, 23:26:08 UTC

Thanks, now onto the FU update. Well, I have chapter six written but I am not happy with it. That is why I have delayed in posting. I personally want to rewrite it and chapter four and five after I have discussed this with my beta so please be patient with me. I

anonymous March 31 2007, 05:58:35 UTC

*cries* Ren-chan!! Don't write such sad stuff! If I'm not aloud to then neither are you! *pouts* (XP But it is really good. Good job. ^.^)

athyestean March 31 2007, 23:27:09 UTC

Lol, thank you. But writing the sad stuff makes me happy, in a weird sort of way. Kind of helps me express myself. I am glad you liked the little piece.

(The comment has been removed)

athyestean April 2 2007, 02:43:40 UTC

Oh my god. You understand! Seriously, I so wanted someone to say that. You have no idea. I seriously, jumped up and down. Wow. Thank you.

Just wow. My life's mission is complete.

(The comment has been removed)

athyestean April 5 2007, 02:52:13 UTC

Sure, I will try. I do have an idea but give me a week or two. I just started job training and I will be working all this weekend. No need to write me anything unless you feel up to something Zack and Cloud-ish pre-Nibelheim from ffvii.