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Melts in Your Mouth (Supernatural RPS - Jared/Jensen)

Mar 11, 2006 21:01

Title: Melts in Your Mouth
Author: moosesal
Rating: NC-17
Fandom/Pairing(s): Supernatural RPS - Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles
Word count: 4700
Warnings: Slash, nothing in particular need of warning
Disclaimer: I don't know these guys. This is purely fiction and fantasy.
A/N or Summary: Many thanks to winterlive for looking at early drafts and giving me feedback. ( Read more... )

Comments 33

lady_shain March 12 2006, 18:25:45 UTC

Wow...oh, just wow. For a first attempt this just kicked ass. Hope you don't mind, but I've friended you. I sure has hell don't want to miss any more of this!

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:51:51 UTC

I don't mind at all. Welcome. :)

And thanks for the comments. I was very nervous attempting these two for the first time, particularly because there's a lot of really good j-squared out there.

estrella30 March 12 2006, 19:20:29 UTC

oh, DUDE!! YAY!! this freaking ROCKS!!

“Whatever you want,” Jared said, looking him in the eye.

“Show me?” he asked. “Show me what you like. Tell me.”

fucking GUH. hottest line EVER. wow. I'm thrilled you wrote this!!

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:52:59 UTC

:) Thanks, sweetie. I feel like I kind of stalled out by the time I got to the sex in this, I was having way more fun with everything else. But now that I've written them, it'll get easier to do it again.

why_me_why_not March 13 2006, 03:19:14 UTC

Brilliant!

This is the first Supernatural RPS I've read, and I LOVE it more than words! I'm afraid everything else I read in this fandom is going to have a hard time measuring up! (I've just recently started getting into Supernatural)

I actually read this last night, but didn't comment b/c I was sooo tired and couldn't form coherent words, much less sentences, but I did rec this in my LJ. And I stopped by your LJ & noticed this is your first Jared/Jensen story? I'm assuming you write / have written in other fandoms? Do you have all your other stuff in one spot? I'm interested in reading more...

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:56:30 UTC

All of my fic can be found in my memories. I've mostly written in Buffyverse, with some dabbling in Due South, Firefly, The Fast and the Furious, and various RPS.

This is my first Jared/Jensen story, but I've been reading them for a while. In January I started doing weekly recs on Fridays if you're looking for stuff to read. There's some good stuff there, but I give a blanket rec to anything written by estrella30 and winterlive -- all of their SPN fic and rps can be found in their memories.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you like this, it was fun to write.

why_me_why_not March 13 2006, 15:17:41 UTC

oh, Yay! I'm not into Buffy, but the others I've dabbled in, so I'll have to check them out. And I'll check your recs too. Thanks!!

darkhavens March 13 2006, 04:53:12 UTC

And while the writers might not be hampering the tension between them, Jensen was pretty sure a tongue kiss between two brothers wasn’t what the WB had in mind for their newest hit series.

But we can dream... :D

This is deliciously hot and fun and gives me pretty mental pictures. :D

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:45:36 UTC

:) Thank you. I'm glad you found it fun, because it was the funny parts that pushed the story for me.

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moosesal March 13 2006, 14:21:23 UTC

I have such a kink for messy pants and going off too quick. It occurs to me that some people would think going off to quick would be a turn-off, or at least a bit unappealing. But in fic? It just means they're so damn aroused they can't control themselves. Mmm.