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Melts in Your Mouth (Supernatural RPS - Jared/Jensen)

Mar 11, 2006 21:01

Title: Melts in Your Mouth
Author: moosesal
Rating: NC-17
Fandom/Pairing(s): Supernatural RPS - Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles
Word count: 4700
Warnings: Slash, nothing in particular need of warning
Disclaimer: I don't know these guys. This is purely fiction and fantasy.
A/N or Summary: Many thanks to winterlive for looking at early drafts and giving me feedback. ( Read more... )

Comments 33

ldthomps March 13 2006, 17:00:11 UTC

See, and now you're slaying us with the J2! Thank you! *melts*

He closed his eyes and tried counting sheep. Then demons. Then smiling faces with dimples and messy hair.

Hee!

Too forward? He realized they’d pretty much passed that point back in the trailer.

See! See! Therein lies your writing brilliance. Your characters were hanging out inside my head during a similar situation in my own life, cuz it's like they're quoting my thoughts and feelings :).

“I don’t know,” Jared teased. “You might not like it. I’ve been told it’s an awful lot like purple M&Ms.”

*g* Everyone's got their M&M foibles, and everyone deserves teasing for them :).

ppst - you've got a "your" where you meant "you're" in the second to last paragraph. I just say something cuz I know I'll notice it when I reread it for the 3rd+ times, too :).

moosesal March 13 2006, 18:34:55 UTC

:) Thanks for the 'your' catch - I mistype that all the time despite clearly knowing the difference. I just can't seem to train my fingers on that.

Glad you liked this. Happy rereading.

dove95 March 14 2006, 05:11:52 UTC

why_me_why_not rec'd you in her LJ.

And, OMG, this is only my second RPS, and whoa! I totally buy this one. I liked the other one I read, but you REALLY hit reality here. I totally see it.

I love the whole play with the M&Ms. That is frickin' awesome! Please tell me there's more?! :)

moosesal March 14 2006, 13:36:39 UTC

This is my first (and so far only) Jared/Jensen. Probably won't write more of this story, but will write more of this pairing in the future. Right now I'm working on some stuff in other fandoms, but you can bet I'll be coming back to these guys.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.

dove95 March 20 2006, 02:26:01 UTC

I didn't think there'd be more to this specific story; I'm more requesting for your hand at jquared cuz it's awesome! :)

feministfangirl March 30 2006, 23:42:03 UTC

I have only just (within the last couple of days) begun reading SPN fic and this is the first Jared/Jensen story I have read. why_me_why_not recommended it to me.

This is excellent! I thoroughly enjoyed every word of it and will definitely be reading more of this pairing--though am a little afraid that it will be difficult to find something I like quite as well as this. *g*

*adds to memories*

moosesal March 31 2006, 00:18:34 UTC

I've been listing recs on most Friday's since the beginning of the year. Check out my rec posts for some great SPN and SPN rps fics. There's definitely some stuff out there that trumps my fic. Enjoy!

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked.

wendy May 14 2006, 01:50:08 UTC

“Yeah, wait till you're inside this ass. I think you’ll like it.”

*dies*

I saw you mention upthread that you do Friday recs...mind if I add?

moosesal May 14 2006, 02:54:36 UTC

I don't mind at all. Glad you liked.

essene October 31 2007, 20:18:38 UTC

You know I love you, right? Man. Oh. Man.

I love the unsure nature of this, the slow way Jensen comes to admit what it is he wants/needs and this:

GUH. That is just HOTT. God, I wish I weren't at work.

moosesal October 31 2007, 21:17:20 UTC

Wow. Thanks, sweetie. I sometimes forget about having written this.

And yes, I know you love me. I love you too.