Title: Discard
Author:
buckle_berryFandom/pairing: LotRPS; Elijah Wood/Dominic Monaghan
Rating: PG-13 for angst
Disclaimer: I made this up.
A/N: Many thanks to
pettydetails for a whipcrackin' beta.
I don't need, I don't need to hear you say
If we weren't so alike
You'd like me a whole lot more
(
Momentarily his fingers hovered over the keypad, but in the end the only button he hit was 'discard.' )
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You did an excellent job with this story.
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There's so much that's fantastic about this. I love the intimacy of it - it's really sort of tragic, but at the same time so humdrum and mundane. And I love the little balancing glimpse of Dom at the end - the unhappiness implicit in that confusion and disconnection.
Gorgeous writing. Beautifully structured. (I am such a ho for good understated angst.)
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You're too good to me, tarte. It was such an angsty prompt, but I quite enjoyed it, really.
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Please tell me it's not the end? There is so much more to say here.
Well done.
:D
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