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Mar 07, 2006 18:00

Title: Discard
Author: buckle_berry
Fandom/pairing: LotRPS; Elijah Wood/Dominic Monaghan
Rating: PG-13 for angst
Disclaimer: I made this up.
A/N: Many thanks to pettydetails for a whipcrackin' beta.

I don't need, I don't need to hear you say
If we weren't so alike
You'd like me a whole lot more

Momentarily his fingers hovered over the keypad, but in the end the only button he hit was 'discard.' )

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pippinmctaggart March 7 2006, 20:58:24 UTC
I'm not even fond of EW/DM, and this was still excellent. You are ev0l. I love you.

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buckle_berry March 15 2006, 00:22:21 UTC
I am touched that you read despite the Domlijah. Thank you, my pippest of pips.

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feelforfaith March 8 2006, 18:59:35 UTC
I went back to reread the prompt after I finished the story, and for me, the prompt makes the atmosphere of this fic not just more sad, but even more hopeless.

You did an excellent job with this story.

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buckle_berry March 15 2006, 00:23:10 UTC
The prompt was so angsty, I couldn't see any way to avoid it! Thanks for the feedback, it is much appreciated :)

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tarteaucitron March 15 2006, 18:34:33 UTC
jesus. breathe.

There's so much that's fantastic about this. I love the intimacy of it - it's really sort of tragic, but at the same time so humdrum and mundane. And I love the little balancing glimpse of Dom at the end - the unhappiness implicit in that confusion and disconnection.

Gorgeous writing. Beautifully structured. (I am such a ho for good understated angst.)

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buckle_berry March 19 2006, 18:50:35 UTC
*blushes crimson*

You're too good to me, tarte. It was such an angsty prompt, but I quite enjoyed it, really.

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lisabellex March 19 2006, 17:12:21 UTC
This is very, very good.

Please tell me it's not the end? There is so much more to say here.

Well done.

:D

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buckle_berry March 19 2006, 18:51:21 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I don't think I can deal with any more angst after writing this one ;)

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ladysunrope March 19 2006, 17:32:03 UTC
Well written, painful to read stuff. I really liked this.

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buckle_berry March 19 2006, 18:54:39 UTC
Not too painful, I hope. Thanks :)

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