FIC: Traveler (LOTR RPS, Billy/Dom)

[feelforfaith]

Title: Traveler
Author: feelforfaith
Fandom: LOTR RPS
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Rating: R
Word count: 3,134
Summary: Some things are like driving at a hundred and fifty miles an hour on a motorway-a part of him wants to do it, just once, to taste the thrill of letting himself go, even though there's a good chance that he'll lose control and crash.
Notes: A big

Comments

[crowson75]

That was sweet, and melancholy and lovely.

[feelforfaith]

Thank you so much. :)

[bella_cheval]

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous!

[feelforfaith]

Bella, are you being seduced into lotrips now? lol I'm very happy you read it and liked it. Thank you for your words :)

[bella_cheval]

Seduced? Me??

*blush*

::whispers::

*yes*

[nickelsandcoats]

Kissing Dom with his eyes closed was like listening to light and shadows skating across Dom's skin, like breathing in the texture of Dom's taut muscles and sharp angles, like caressing the moans falling off Dom's lips when he tried to get Billy deeper into his mouth.

Those lines are gorgeous. I loved your story, it was lovely and a bit sad, but always hopeful.

[feelforfaith]

Thank you so much! Yes, I wanted the good feelings to be what's left in the end :)

[dashery]

Wow. This is a thing of beauty (much like Dom's hands, belly, shoulders, and chest). I love how you wove all the facets of their relationship together; the good, the fun, the mistakes, the struggles, and the endurance.

He took a deep breath and went for it-a leap of faith that felt like jumping out of an airplane-trusting that he had the right answer to the right question, and that come tomorrow morning, everything would still be all right.

And you did such a great job with your prompt, like subtly showcasing Billy's faith against the backdrop of his self-proclaimed fear of heights. Not to mention, the licking off of the question mark did fluttery things to my insides. :) This is one of my favorites.

[feelforfaith]

Thank you so much. At first, I didn't know what to do with the "woman" bit in the prompt, but taking liberties with the interpretation came in handy, lol. I'm happy you liked the end result :).

[piratesorka]

I think dashery said exactly everything I wanted to say. Damm, now anything I say will just sound like a rerun. I still wanted you to know that one more person ( me!) really liked, no, make that savored what you've written.

Plus, let me say that I deeeply appreciate that you have written Dom and Billy as two grown sexy men, not the least like angsty girls.So many fic writers make that mistake and its a huge turn off.

So yeah, I truly enjoyed this. Thank you.

[feelforfaith]

Thank you for your wonderful feedback :).

(And I know what you mean about men being written like angsty girls, and I very much appreciate what you said.)