FIC; Broken Strings

Mar 08, 2009 16:55

demilena
6000 and something words

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we_all_fall March 8 2009, 22:29:06 UTC
I may be biased, but fuck that...

This. Is. Awesome.

The angst & drama, the love, the cuteness of Mikaya, the whole "Mama Lena" thing...it all just fit together so well. You seriously did an amazing job with this fic, and your ideas were kickass.

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xcinamonx March 8 2009, 22:44:49 UTC
This is definitely different from every other story I've read. I really liked Selena in this fic and Mikaya was very cute :)
Will there be more to the story? Like, the wedding and such? I'd really like to read that :)

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ahoyyy March 8 2009, 22:49:32 UTC
ahh, I loved this.
The angst, the adorbzness of Mikaya & just ugh everything. I liked the slightly darker concept, I haven't read a Demilena fic like it. Love your writing :)

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fallinghard4her March 8 2009, 23:12:04 UTC
Wow that was incredible.
It seems like so true to life
You evenly spreed out the emotions and made each of them hit hard.
:]

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sunburst89 March 8 2009, 23:19:08 UTC
This was beautiful! And so not like anything else I've read...that's why I like it so much. I love Mikaya scheming to get them together. My favorite part was when she made Demi and Selena propose to each other. And Sel called her "our daughter". So adorable.

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