Comments | augiie: [Oneshot] Me, You, and This Morning that Comes Too Early

augiie

[Oneshot] Me, You, and This Morning that Comes Too Early

Mar 24, 2011 21:49

( “How could it be me? You’re the one being all loud and noisy in this early morning,” L retorts back. He smiles a bit, happy to feel Sungyeol’s fingers interlace with his. )

you, fic: me, and this morning that comes too early ;

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pikagyu March 25 2011, 00:37:01 UTC

Ah! So cute. Definitely something I love to see. Fluff without plot is even better than normal fluff, and this was cute. I like the way you described their relationship. There are a strange grammar things here and there, but English isn't your first language right? It's not enough to take away from the fic, though, so don't worry about, it was still really enjoyable to read :3 thanks for sharing!

augiie March 25 2011, 06:30:21 UTC

Ah, so you like fluffy fics too? *hugsyouhappily* Yeah, english isnt my native and tbh, i'm currently looking for someone to beta my writings since my grammar suck :( Is is really bad, like really really bad? Hope you dont find any difficulties to understand the story, thank you love :D

napookie March 25 2011, 01:02:29 UTC

My favorite part has always been “I did it because I want to. I want to make you happy.” ♥ good job on this one ^^b write mooaaarrr!

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augiie March 25 2011, 06:33:37 UTC

what happens next? They wake up a bit late, that is LOL, sorry havent think bout it yet :). Should i make another one or a sequel? Thanks for reading anyway :D

piknussh March 25 2011, 05:28:58 UTC

"this guy surely sleeps like a deadlock, even his natural face said so" HAHAHAHAHAHA *siram L pake air seember*

i really want to squeeze them both for being so cute XDD
i was picturing Yeollie cute face when he said “Myungsoo is a pabo-yah.” and i ended up biting my phone hahaha

this is DAEBAK XD
i know that you're an awesome writer and you should write more scratchabisUANscratch *smirk*

augiie March 25 2011, 23:18:49 UTC

*wipes L til he gets dry* hahaha, sleepy-pervy-koala indeed lol. Since i will reduce my time for internet browsings, seems like i can write a bit hehehe *supah lazy student*

lidya_95 March 25 2011, 07:58:11 UTC

hi there my beloved senpai!!!!! As I told you before, I don't really familiar with the characters so I got difficulties to process the words here *since my brain works so slow* Well, if I have to say this honestly, I LOVE IT! At first I thought it would be M-rated. hohohohohoho. I REALLY LOVE THE LOVEY-DOVEY STUFF HERE!!! It's been a while since the last time I read a fic with this genre.I really love the way you write it. I can exactly imagine the scene when they had a bad mouth and when they suddenly kiss each other. It's really sweet and truth to be told, I became so curious about how they look like. Is it the same like I imagined? hahahhahahha... Really senpai, you need to write more. And about the FWP I don't really mind and I guess everyone too, because you replaced it with tons of great fluffiness. And maybe, next time you need to make the sequel for this 'cause I can't wait L say 'I love you' to Yeol. >,< And, you need to know too that first I thought that L was the uke. Well done! See? I told you to write since long time ago ( ... )