Sequeling the sequel

Jun 01, 2008 17:20



Disclaimer: I don't own Dark Angel.

Morning after

Morning afters were awkward.

This cliché was nothing new for Logan, who over the years had experienced that there was some truth to it. Brightly illuminated morning afters with a threesome of chatty females, however, who seemingly overnight had discovered some obscure new quality about him, were ( Read more... )

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grievingmess June 1 2008, 21:04:19 UTC
I can't believe you cooked this up amidst all the exams. Your brain has super powers. You need to give it to me!

Omg, this just begs for a sequel to the sequel of the sequel.

Logan and his morning thoughts is just too adorable! So very well written, and Logan's cluelessness about the 3 girls' reactions is very typically MALE. :D :D

Thanks for this!

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geeky_apple June 2 2008, 20:58:55 UTC
Thanks, hope poor, flustered Logan wasn’t too much of a distraction from your exams…

I’ll happily agree to a brain exchange assuming that yours will be very handy for economic questions - you on the other hand would regret it.

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grievingmess June 3 2008, 01:43:12 UTC
I got an 18 in Economy out of 20 last year for finals... It is VERY handy for it hahahaha.... how is yours in terms of law? hahahaha

Good luck for your exam today!!

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Stupendous! fauxcynic June 1 2008, 23:06:53 UTC
This is great! And you never mentioned it being posted! (and why doesn't my e-mail get notices of AURLCO, anyhow? Many thanks to Grievingmess for changing her IM message so I had the hint that *something* was up!!)

This is really terrific! Logan is so *CUTE* being all host-y and efficient and squirmy...

"The vague impression of having missed something important was only intensified by the fact that the perfectly natural comfort of the last night had yielded to a certain stiffness now that the sun had come out to melt the icy threats of the last night into harmless slush."

...I just live this "The vague impression of having missed something important..." because not only it is funny and so easily imagined in this scene, it really set the image for me as I read the rest, how Logan was moving thru this morning. Priceless!

"The phenomenon raising his suspicion wasn’t so much Kendra’s raving praise of his homemade plum-jam that was delivered while her eyes wandered over his chest with a different kind of appetite seemingly fueled ( ... )

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Re: Stupendous! geeky_apple June 2 2008, 21:04:00 UTC
Thank you:-) (I might just blush if your smiling Logan hadn’t already caused that)

Admittedly I’m really glad you like it, wasn’t really feeling comfortable with posting as I didn’t want to lower the standard of the whole cycle too much after yours and Lisa’s stories.

anyone going to take the next round at Jam Pony or Crash? ;}
Makes me think… considering the usual shortage of M/Lness on FFnet (with you being the lonely exception), would it be silly / too repetitive / unnecessary to post the three parts under Writer’s Pulse?

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mrsevilpigeon June 1 2008, 23:44:12 UTC
I love that you sequeled the sequel, I love this cute little story, I love Logan, and I loved that last line SO MUCH!

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geeky_apple June 2 2008, 21:01:32 UTC
Thanks, glad you don’t seem to regret me sequeling yours…

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mrsevilpigeon June 2 2008, 21:21:00 UTC
Why on earth would I regret it? (Other than that tiny regret I have every time his clothes are left intact)I really, really loved that last line, the more I think about it...gives me that pleasant Logan shivery feeling.

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roses_in_may August 29 2008, 15:08:15 UTC
oh, i really like it. nice

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geeky_apple August 29 2008, 16:01:03 UTC
Thank you, nice to see someone unfamiliar comment:-)

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