This Thing We Have

Apr 19, 2005 23:43

So I was telling Myr the other day...I got another package from the boys in the back room. Now they insisted that it was only a little Sara/Greg scenelet and that it would be fluffy and porny ( Read more... )

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stumbelina April 20 2005, 09:31:18 UTC
::flails::

::gibbers and flails some more::

That! Up there! ^

Maybe it is because I just woke up, or maybe it is because that was a sweet funny angsty ride full of perfect character moments and the bestest bye-bye-Grissom-crush and oh, I give up because I am still gibbering.

I need a Sara icon. Sorry I can't give you anything constructive, but I am such an emotional reader -I get sucked in by the story transparent and - yeah, a ride. What did I love though?

The thank-you-very-much Protestant work ethic of Sara, her guilt and nervous energy channeled into controlling her life while Greg snoozes. The argument that isn't - yeah, just something not being right and it builds. So true to CSI and a lot of the Sara interaction/characterisation - It is not about big pronouncements but unspoken accusations and tense moments and terse "Fine"s.

Wow, see me gibber.

And I love me some Pirate!Greg porn it seems. Oh yeah.

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autobadgirl April 20 2005, 21:48:14 UTC
You know what...getting your emotional reactions to my story is fabulous!

Thank you. And I don't think you gibber at all, you said some really sweet and lovely things any fic writer would be pleased as punch to read.

So thank you again, Stumble *hugs*

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Harlequinn CSI Novel tripp3235 April 20 2005, 14:30:46 UTC
I didn't think you could top your previous story but you did!! I LOVED this. I really like Sara/Greg told from Sara's POV but considering how difficult her character is, it's really hard to find. You did a GREAT job!!

And I LOVE to know she is truly satisfied by Greg. (Can we order more Pirate!Greg porn?)

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Re: Harlequinn CSI Novel autobadgirl April 20 2005, 21:53:22 UTC
Baie'la thank you so much! I have a thing for Sara, every CSI fic I've written so far has her in it,*is a wee bit obsessed* it's such a huge boost to hear that I have a grasp on the character.

As for Dashing!Pirate!Greg! I have *no idea* where he came from but I can't see him disappearing for too-too long.

And: Congratulations to you, for you know what! I tried to say something on your LJ but couldn't because of random LJ stupidness.

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Re: Harlequinn CSI Novel autobadgirl April 20 2005, 21:55:26 UTC
Oh no wait...you aren't the one *is mixed up*

Well congrats anyway! For being you and yeah...I'll just go.

*slinks off, embarrassed*

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Re: Harlequinn CSI Novel tripp3235 April 20 2005, 21:55:40 UTC
Um, congratulations, um, thanks. I think. Do you mean Slynn?

*trying to remember why I need congratulations* You know it's always nice to hear it.

You are a really good writer, I just HAVE to add you to my friends list :)

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slynn6776 April 20 2005, 14:49:09 UTC
Wow! I loved it! Pirate!Greg porn... hee..hee...

Okay, I'll try to be constructive and not squee like a fangirl, but wow! Just excellent.

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autobadgirl April 20 2005, 22:03:33 UTC
Okay *you* I have to congratulate! Not random others I get you mixed up with...*points to earlier comment*

*stands up* Hi, my name is Badgirl and I'm very dumb.

But, Pirate!Greg and Wench!Sara don't seem to mind...ANY-way. I'm happy I made you squee on a day, when you have bigger and better things to squee about. (See I thought you were Tripp and...yeah. Hijinks ensued...kind of like a witty French farce except minus the wit)

*facepalms*

Thank you.

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slynn6776 April 20 2005, 22:42:18 UTC
Thanks! *grin* tripp3235 are easy to confuse as we have the same obsessions!

Well, the initial squee-ness of my situation has worn off slightly, replaced by a vague seasick-like feeling that has kept me pretty much stationary... this story was a wonderful break from that (I've already read it twice now)!

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amethyst_lupin April 20 2005, 15:44:27 UTC
Hee. That was great! The Pirate!Greg porn was good fun ;) You did an excellent job of capturing Sara character.

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autobadgirl April 20 2005, 22:05:20 UTC
Thank you very much. I was a little weirded by the Pirate!Greg but I went with it anyway...

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autobadgirl April 20 2005, 22:05:50 UTC
Then my work here is done :)

Thank you!

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