Comments | autumnsxxangel: #073. The Other One

autumnsxxangel

#073. The Other One

Jun 08, 2011 11:53

Broken Delusions
#073. The Other one, Doojoon/Dongwoon
Fic: 1/100
A/N: Beta-ed by playfulninja
He knew his place, where he stood, his position in the relationship. It was achingly clear, like sharp shards of broken glass cutting into his skin, a constant reminder trailing down in the form of crimson tears.

“You’re an idiot,” was what Junhyung said, watching him ( Read more... )

100 beast fanfic challenge, doojoon/dongwoon

Comments 11

<3 leggymimi June 8 2011, 17:40:16 UTC

;-; OHHHH, THIS WAS SO PRECIOUS. SAD AND HEARTACHING BUT PRECIOUS. My heart goes out to Baby Woonie!!!! >-<

I give you my heart for your first BEAST fic being DooWoon. You do not know how happy that makes me. <33 They are love. Seriously. There needs to be moooore.

But in HERE. It was just so sad. Poor Dongwoonie~ He will never be Doojoon's... Well... at least, he won't be what he wishes to be to Doojoon. His emotions and hurt... they were realistic. They sang out to my pathetic heart. Q^Q I want to cuddle him...

I LOVED THIS BB. <3 Good job~~ :'D

Re: <3 autumnsxxangel June 9 2011, 04:55:22 UTC

:D I'm glad you liked it! I love DooWoon~!! But the theme just inspired this even though they deserve a happy ending. Leader and maknae ftw~!

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autumnsxxangel June 9 2011, 04:57:22 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I hope you didn't cry too much~! kekeke.

sinnerchrno13 June 9 2011, 02:44:31 UTC

cookies for the first fic being DooWoon. this pairing is so unappreciated. i mean, i ship DooSeob and KiWoon, but this here is like my little guilty pleasure. OTL

i can totally see woonie that way. his actions, so... maknae-like? he'll probably do anything for his hyung, even be the other one for doojoonie. (kiki, your baby's hurting where the hell are you ;A;)

congrats on the fic! i'll be waiting for more. :]

p.s. i love your protective junnie. oh joker-shii, is woonie your new pikachu?

autumnsxxangel June 9 2011, 05:10:29 UTC

I totally ship DooWoon. It's just...leader and baby! It's so cute! (usually, when it's not angst. lol) I love the rarer pairings.

And thank you so much for reading! My bias is Junhyung so I had to add in him somehow. lol

countrymir June 9 2011, 16:20:17 UTC

not bad for a first fic, not bad at all. i really like the way you showed their relationship though :3

autumnsxxangel June 13 2011, 17:06:50 UTC

Kekeke thank you! :D

kawaiisaru July 3 2011, 10:34:07 UTC

....what.
I EXPECTED CHAAANGE AHUHHHUHU QQ
This was beautiful in it's own way ; w;~
Thankyou for writing it ; n;~

autumnsxxangel July 3 2011, 23:36:58 UTC

Thank you for reading it!

(And who knows? There might be a possible sequel ? ;P)