Natural Order

Jun 24, 2012 10:25

Title: Natural Order

Pairing(s): QMi

Genre(s): Romance, sci-fi!AU

Length: 4049 words

Rating: PG-18

Summary: In a world based on perfection and order, Kyuhyun learns that love is anything but perfect and orderly.

Inspiration(s): I just wanted to touch on what would be the “perfect world”, loosely based on John Lennon’s song Imagine. Written for leprixx's ( Read more... )

pairing: qmi, au: sci-fi

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ava_lava June 24 2012, 21:52:45 UTC
I'm so glad that you liked this! It's unbetaed and I was worried that some of the ideas I wanted to expand on didn't cone through. Happy Birthday! Hope it was amazing!

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pinkymingo June 24 2012, 20:25:57 UTC
This was absolutely beautiful.
I can't think of much else to say, but it was so touching and I absolutely adored it.

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ava_lava June 25 2012, 16:16:07 UTC
-tear- thank you for reading!

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uchouten June 24 2012, 22:47:48 UTC
my
heart..........
all of my feeeeeels omg <3
this was really beautiful and really made me think which is actually surprisingly hard because I am not that smart
thank you so much <3 I TEARED UP FKLASJFLKJ

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ava_lava June 25 2012, 16:17:17 UTC
I'm not that smart either LOL. Thanks for reading!

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ava_lava June 25 2012, 16:17:43 UTC
Glad you understood it! I was so worried that some things were not explained properly! Thanks!

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rkqs12 June 25 2012, 12:05:28 UTC
SO BEAUTIFUL! I almost cried at the end but I'm in a public space.

I love futuristic scifi plots. You're is really good, only that I think of viagra for the little blue pill. XD

Gosh, I really liked this. This was really well written. ^^ <3

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ava_lava June 25 2012, 16:22:24 UTC
I just looked up viagra photos online and surprisesurprise it is a little blue pill. And then I looked up 'little blue pill' online and the first post was the wiki page on viagra. LMAO I so did not realize that; this is hilarious.

Anyways, thanks for reading and pointing that out! Made my day that I wrote a whole fic with indications of viagra without knowing it LOL!

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