Traitors Chapter Four: Part Three

[avlyn_naturae]

Title: Traitors Chapter Four (Part Three)

Fandom: Star Wars

Pairing: Anakin/Obi-Wan (with hints of Anakin/Padme)

Rating: Generally R/NC-16 (for violence, deaths, future sex, language...)

Summary: Following the events of Skywalker's transformation into Darth Vader, a hint of Darth Sidious' plans are revealed. At the brink of a new era, assumptions

Comments

[blue_crow]

omg. i love it. that is so beautiful, the dream.. no one would dream like Anakin, I think..

a wonderful epic with so many layers of detail, i'm quite frankly impressed. and a little stunned.

[avlyn_naturae]

Vivid dreams...or are they visions like the death of Anakin's mother? Hmm...I must meditate on it. Thank you for your reponse - really appreciated.

[avlyn_naturae]

Thanks for being patient with me. I got a bit of a writer's block, my fingers simply couldn't type even though I knew what I wanted to write. It made me panic. Thanks again.

[anakin415]

wow I am stuck in a whirlwind. thanks for the (chapters) xmas present hope to see more soon

[avlyn_naturae]

I hope I'll succeed with the next chapter. Things are speeding up for sure, and escalating to...actually I haven't thought about the conclusion to this story.

[aislinn_tredor]

Love it. This chapter was excellent and I loved the dream aspect of it, they've always hinted things to Anakin and this was great.
I loved these lines:
"Obi-Wan was a centre of peace and tranquility in a storm."
"It was like coming home to a sanctuary after a tiring journey"

Such great descriptors of what Obi-Wan means to Anakin. Loved his emotion when he realized Obi-Wan was afraid of him.
It's bringing to light what he wants from him, the last line to his thoughts was excellent.

[avlyn_naturae]

What does Obi-Wan really mean to Anakin? One of the issues surrounding Anakin, that's for sure. The last line was a suggestion hlglne, and I'm glad that came out great. It sure foreshadows a lot of things to come.

[black_mariah]

Ooh. Loverly. You pinned Anakin really well, he seems like the kind of guy who would always be torn between being incredibly gentle with people he loves, or incredibly violent. It's always the extremes with him. ^_^ Well done.

[ariespureblood]

OMG i loved how you phrased that, That is extremely anakin and that's why we love him so much! I just had to reply to your comment cause it's so trueee!

[black_mariah]

Gotta love the Anakin. ^o^

[avlyn_naturae]

Thanks. Anakin has always seemed that kind of guy to me. But I love him all the same.