Lover I Don’t Have To Love [A Bright Eyes, JongLuna songfic]

May 21, 2010 23:48

Title: Lover I Don’t Have To Love [A Bright Eyes, JongLuna songfic]
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jonghyun(shinee)/Luna(f(x))
Summary AU. Luna is a pretty little singer who lives in the protective bubble created by her parents before running away to live with Amber, where she meets Jonghyun, the boy previously expelled from her school.

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pairing: onber, rating: nc-17, pairing: jongluna, fanfiction: shining effects, f(x)

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heart_emily May 22 2010, 06:16:25 UTC
spot; i love f(shinee) fics;
i must read >:)

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heart_emily May 22 2010, 06:26:33 UTC
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY <3
omg ;___; jonghyun as an expelled student ):
i love luna's attitude and amber <3 wow o-o amber with onew; never thought of that.

Fuck you.
No thanks you’re not my type, but I appreciate the offer!
I should hope she’s not your type. At this point Luna is hardly surprised at the third, deeper voice that joins her.

LOL LUNA; I LOVE HER ATTITUDE. and the ending <3
i really loved this (: hope you write more fanfics !

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awkwardnormalcy May 22 2010, 06:31:20 UTC
Your icon. Your comment. ILU <3 glad you love Shining Effects too~

Thank you bb! I wrote it in one sitting in like two hours because I LOVE this song and this plot wouldn't get out of my brain so I was worried that it wouldn't be so spiffy XD but thank you for quelling that fear~

Really? I wrote a fluffy two shot with OnBer if you wanna read it :3 do you want linkage?

-dances- Thanks, I definitely will,and I'm pleased you like LOVE her attitude, i'll be sure to inclue fiery Luna in more fics now <3 thank you for commenting bb~

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heart_emily May 22 2010, 06:38:43 UTC
OMG YOUR ICON <3 YOUR COMMENT.
heehee i love you too 8D

its really good o-o its not spiffy >O don't worry !

YES PLEASE i want to read more of your works (:

oh; and can i add you so i can see if you have more fanfics up ? pleasee.

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awkwardnormalcy May 22 2010, 16:30:12 UTC
Thank you! I wasn't going to continue it but since everyone seems to like it so much I probably will *_*

JongLuna or Onber though~?

Thank you for commenting <3

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awkwardnormalcy May 23 2010, 04:58:28 UTC
Onber posted just now :3 there is JongLuna in it though~

Don't worry, I'm not near done with Shining Effects, and I find my Jonghyun oddly fun to write XD

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jishu May 22 2010, 13:14:25 UTC
I'm loving this~
so well written~
can't imagine Luna cursing like that~
but I don't care~
it fits well in this story~
and the OnBer side pairing was a PLUS!

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awkwardnormalcy May 22 2010, 16:32:43 UTC
XD Neither can I, but I'm glad I made it not-so-weird in the story ^^

I'm glad you love it bb~ and my ninja!Onber :3 thank you for commenting!

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wintersol May 22 2010, 13:39:49 UTC
Kyaaaa!
This is so cool! I never thought about the Jonghyun/Luna pairing, but it works. They're tiny, sing amazingly, and Luna's even got blonde highlights in her hair now!

Anyway, this was good. Well written and the song lyrics fit. I like Amber too, she's so cool. And her with Onew /dies. Too much amazing to handle.

Good job!

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awkwardnormalcy May 22 2010, 16:37:28 UTC
XD I can't believe its not more popular really, it seems natural for them to be paired together to me :X

Thanks! I was worried that it wasn't dark enough for the song, but I'm glad I kept it now! OnBer def = <3 :3

Thank you for commenting bb!

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xkeirafanx May 22 2010, 13:48:09 UTC
Great piece of writing!

I love the change Luna makes and how Jonghyun's and her relationship isn't complicated, but super simple.
Also, the cute Amber/Onew hint at the ending makes me begging you for a sequel with them *puppy eyes*

It was really, really great. Wirte more like this <33

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awkwardnormalcy May 22 2010, 16:40:22 UTC
Thanks, I wanted Luna to ~grow~ you know what I mean? I had to rush it a bit because of the style of the fic, but I'm glad you still like it.

I will for you bb :3 might, I hadn't thought about it until this piece got so many comments *_*. I thought it would be too ~strange~ for most people xD

I definitely will! Thank you for commenting!

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xkeirafanx May 22 2010, 17:33:50 UTC
Yes, I understand what you mean, it is well done. One barely recognizes that it's rushed.

Well, it's really well written and I be some people came because of the NC-17 rating *hrm*

I just realized by sneaking into your user info that we were born the same day.

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awkwardnormalcy May 22 2010, 17:57:29 UTC
Thank you, that means a lot,seriously.

-coughs- I kinda lied though, there is no ~hot sexxxy time~ I was just being careful XD.

Oh?-sneaks into yours too- You write Jongho! Clever little Jongho! How did I never see that ficlet D: and Farenheit ftw <3

Oh yeah, Aries holla -high fives-

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