[Poetry!]

[ayuette]

Well- I was going through my computer files and found this! I was going to post it back when I first wrote it for my Creative Writing class, but I forgot :P So here it is now!

Presenting *insert trumpet noise here* Bump in the Night! (It's my first poem in a long loooooooooong time xD)

Comments

[fantasymphony]

Ummm...

THAT WAS GREAT!

I really like it. I love dark poetry. I love it (and the title). Great work!

[ayuette]

Thanks! :D I don't know if I'd call it "dark" poetry... but that's okay! I don't have much experance in that line of writing. But Its (sorta) fun to do. Now if I could just learn to like writing sonnets...

OH!

I'm glad you liked the title too, it took me FOREVER to come up with one. Titles are tough for me to pick.

[piyo_halliwell]

Ooo, nice. I like it.

[ayuette]

Thanks. :) It needs some work. But I thought I'd post it anyway :P

[secretwindow1]

That's really good, I love it! :)

You write in this style nicely, I've never been able to write in this style before.

[ayuette]

Thank you very much! I really like the freeverse style of poetry. Sonnetts on the other hand (or anything with rhyme!) are the bane of my existance :)

You're good with rhymes though! Next time I have a rhyming poem I'll ask you xD