Comments | ayzilia: fic: Colors run prime (1/?)

ayzilia

fic: Colors run prime (1/?)

Sep 06, 2011 21:12

Title: Colors run prime (1/?)
Author: ayzilia
Fandom: DCU
Paring: Tim/Kon
Rating: R, for language
Word Count: 1,628
Summary: In the wake of the Wayne-Kryptonian Treaty, Tim and Kon struggle to adjust their dreams, prejudices, and expectations to fit into the scope of their new life together. A/N: This follows My kind is not your kind. Read that first for ( Read more... )

series: not your kind, tim drake-wayne, tim/kon, kon-el

Comments 26

thecivilunrest September 8 2011, 12:32:22 UTC

I'm so happy that this is going to be continued! I hope this gets really long. (:

Anyway, this is great. Poor Kon, he's trying so hard and Tim just (literally) puts a door in between them. I hope he doesn't give up!

I like the angle that you're coming from as in an 'they're-so-different' kind of way.

This is awesome and I can't wait for the next part!

ayzilia September 8 2011, 18:00:41 UTC

Kon is way too stubborn to give up. :) But Timmy is settling in for a long siege, so you might get your wish length-wise. Thank you for reading and commenting!

sweety8587 September 21 2011, 10:02:04 UTC

These people didn’t understand him at all. Didn’t see his most fundamental…Of course he had added extra security features to his door.

oh Tim Tim Timmy *ruffles hair* pot kettle much babe? Besides, how do you expect them to understand you when you've been holed up in yer room since you got there eh? *noogies* silly boy~

ayzilia September 23 2011, 21:54:34 UTC

Naw, thanks for reading!

kuonji14 August 19 2012, 06:55:51 UTC

Oh, yay! I am So Glad there is a sequel!

This quote completely grabbed me. I think it is the heart of this chapter: Almost nothing-and really Tim couldn’t even think without qualifiers because as soon as he started with absolutes a more extreme example would materialize-could twist the knife of his new reality more than Kon attempting to open his door without waiting for permission. These people didn’t understand him at all. Didn’t see his most fundamental…Of course he had added extra security features to his door.This is Tim alone amid a bunch of people who can fry him to ashes or throw him through a wall or just sort of blink and see him naked with x-ray eyes. These are people who, b/c they are this way, are conversely perfectly open and honest with each other. They are definitely aliens in every way, and even though they are perfectly nice people, they don't understand Tim and hurt him just by being themselves. Tim is very brave there at the end. I hope the super-family appreciates it ( ... )

ayzilia August 31 2012, 05:29:16 UTC

OMG! I can't believe you just compared me to iesika! I love iesika's work! *dances with sheer joy* Best compliment ever!

kuonji14 August 31 2012, 08:42:46 UTC

*BG, I'm glad. :)