LJI 10:8 - no comment

[az_starshine]

I kept seeing the news stories about the murders on TV. They were all over the evening news, as perfectly coiffed anchorwomen with makeup applied thick as Spackle with a trowel seriously discussed the body of another missing, drug- addled prostitute, her skin pockmarked, eyes dead, hair unkempt. The media always said they were younger than they

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Wow! Great story! Very engaging right away! (With all the hookers in the story, I hesitate to say, "I was 'HOOKED'! LOL)

[az_starshine]

Thanks!

I do love a good pun, so I'd give you a pass.

[roina_arwen]

Ooh, well done! Great piece!

[az_starshine]

Thank you#

[dmousey]

This captured and held my interest all the way though. I like how well you plotted this out! Nice job! Hugs and peace~~~

[az_starshine]

Thanks!

Even while writing it, i had this feeling of uneasiness through the whole thing. Glad it keot you interested.

[rayaso]

Excellent! Nothing like a serial killer to change things up. I like the way you set this up and managed to solve the mystery in such a short story.

[az_starshine]

Thank you! I appreciate that.

[dee_aar2]

What an awesome way to start this week's reading. Loved the plot and how engaging it was. Well Done.

[az_starshine]

Yay! Thanks. :)