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Jun 16, 2007 18:17

Title: Three Free Leads Danny Concannon Did Take
Author: athena4lynn
Character: Danny Concannon
Rating: PG
Pairings (if any): no pairing
A/N: Thanks to delle, nestra, and sternel for beta.

CJ: Four other press secretaries and you never took a free lead ( Read more... )

Comments 13

docfraiser8 June 20 2007, 19:00:48 UTC

I really like the way you head each part with a 'news headline'. It adds to the storyline.
It's a solid, well written, interesting story. I like it.

You always make me like Danny more than I did before. You have a quality of writing that isn't over done but it still draws you in. Love.

athena4lynn June 23 2007, 18:19:13 UTC

Thank you very much! :-) I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I always worry, writing a "less popular" character, that no one is truly going to enjoy reading it. Thanks!

purple_elefants June 21 2007, 19:50:00 UTC

You really nailed Danny's voice. Well done.

athena4lynn June 23 2007, 18:19:36 UTC

Thank you!!

littleloonlost June 21 2007, 19:51:27 UTC

It's great to read fic that makes me feel I know the character better than I did before. And I love what you've done with Katie. Well done, there really isn't enough of this kind of thing.

athena4lynn June 23 2007, 18:21:20 UTC

Thank you! I always try, with Danny, to making him a more rounded character than he was in the show... We saw a bit of it, but never quite enough...

I'm glad you enjoyed this!

pocky_slash June 22 2007, 22:06:18 UTC

Oh wow, this was awesome. I love Danny and I love the set up for each of these little scenarios, particularly the way he helps the assistant along in the middle one. That seemed very Danny to me, for some reason.

Anyway, this was terrific and I might send some people over here later. Great job!

athena4lynn June 23 2007, 18:22:52 UTC

Thank you! For the comments, and (if you did) for sending people over! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story - and that you found it in character. YAY!

inocciduous June 26 2007, 02:35:19 UTC

(here via pocky_slash! *waves*)

This is so great! I ♥ Danny (he's about my favorite non-title character) and there aren't a lot of great fics about him out there. The part with Josh playing pool was fantastic, but I really loved the first one. Danny getting a feel for the White House press room isn't something I've ever seen before, and the evolution of him as a professional reporter fascinates me. :)

*mems*

athena4lynn July 2 2007, 16:42:03 UTC

Thank you!! :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

What does 'mems' mean?