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Jun 20, 2007 22:36

Title: Mother Tongue
Character: Little Toby (and associated Zieglers)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 500

( he's a gobby little bugger )

Comments 6

lifeasanamazon June 21 2007, 09:17:00 UTC

This is fucking brilliant. I wanted to quote all the bits I loved, but I can't - it's the whole bloody thing.

That last sentence, though, that last sentence is genius.

Oh how I love the way you write.

littleloonlost June 23 2007, 19:54:31 UTC

That's him! In your icon. My little Toby, growed up and still holding on for dear life.

Thank you, my love. If you like it, it's worth doing.

purple_elefants June 21 2007, 22:29:28 UTC

Wow, this is great. Tobias, little Toby. *g*

littleloonlost June 23 2007, 20:00:20 UTC

Oh, your icon is love! Thank you for commenting, I'm so pleased you liked.

sweetly_savage June 23 2007, 07:01:50 UTC

God this is glorious! Your Toby is the Toby I wish I could write and never seem able. Guh, this is gorgeous.

And yeah, lifeasanamazon called it, that last line is perfection. I just love that Toby continued to roar long after.

Perfection!

littleloonlost June 23 2007, 20:11:55 UTC

*snuggles* I'm so glad you like him. Thank you, darling.