A Moment's Reprieve, 2/3

May 04, 2008 12:32

Title: A Moment's Reprieve, Part 2/3
Rating: PG
Genre: try not to suffocate in all the fluff
Pairing: roy/ed
Warning: i can't think of anything clever this time around...
Summary: Part 2 of a set of quasi-domestic ficlets. they can all be stand-alones, since they aren't part of an overall fic, i just grouped them together because they are similar ( Read more... )

fma, ed/roy

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radcat38 May 4 2008, 20:05:33 UTC
Ver nice work. Good imagery. Well written. Makes you want a Roy or Ed in your life and this type of morning. Thanks. Not too fluffy. Just right. (Or should I do a bad pun and say just write?! hahah...not enough sleep or coffee!!) Hope your computer makes it...sorry about the virus. Thank your grandparents for us 'cause they are the ones that let you use their computer to give us this gift. Thanks.

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 00:56:33 UTC
such a lengthy comment, thank you so much!

haha, i was going to make a phoenix wright pun and say just wright. we are so lame XD

man, i wish i had a roy AND an ed, plus a few more of these types of mornings.
the virus is nasty, worst kind of computer STD and hah right now i've stolen another for about 5 minutes

ANYWHO thanks so much, and i'm really glad you liked it!

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elegantpaws May 4 2008, 20:18:04 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous! I do think we need to redefine the words used for such snippets of pleasure. It isn't fluff it is divine and what everyone seeks.

That was delightful.

EP

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 01:01:33 UTC
ahhhhhh!!! i'm-wow. extremely flattered! haha
( snippets of pleasure, i loved how you phrased that
and in a way i feel awkward calling it fluff because it's more like-just niceness. peaceful. and i've read other fics in this non-category too, so i think we should figure out a word to redefine them!

thanks so so much, m'glad you liked it
(and in all honesty your comment had me squee with delight)

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elegantpaws May 7 2008, 01:27:37 UTC
Yes lets, re new definition (wink) and I am most happy that you SQUEED...it means you will continue to delight our collective palettes . Thank you.

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loooie May 4 2008, 21:06:56 UTC
commandeer for the win!
:)
most excellent, of course

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 01:02:49 UTC
LAMER YOUR COMMENT DOESN'T COUNT!!
(hah, can you tell im responding to them all at once?)
but all the same im glad you didnt throw it back in my face

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loooie May 7 2008, 01:10:51 UTC
well then
i'm glad you have access to a computer?

and i think your writing sucks. please don't ever write again. how could you possibly post something this horrendous. i hope i never meat you. your fic is icky.

i'm totally kidding, by the way, in case you couldn't tell. i love your writing, lamer.
hey hey i did all my homework! even math!

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 01:20:33 UTC
WTF why are you doing math and i'm not????
this makes no sense!!!
DON'T MEAT ME or i will be in throws of pain

...your face is icky. you gargantuan.

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olliegami May 4 2008, 22:07:56 UTC
This was so sweet~ Well Done.

Also, a tip about the linking?

http://b-borealis.livejournal.com/5334.html#cutid1"> This is where you type whatever you want to call your link

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 01:05:00 UTC
thanks! im very complimented by your...compliment. and clearly i now lack verbal fluidity, haha
but thanks all the same

oh and i do appreciate the tip on the linking, i'll see how my technological ineptness handles it

(psst thanks again)

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olliegami May 7 2008, 10:51:35 UTC
Lol. Anything for a fellow ficcer~

Feel free to be complimented by y compliments, they compliment your complimation? That makes no sense I know.

Hope the linking help is useful to you. =D

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fritz42 May 4 2008, 22:46:30 UTC
Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed this domestic moment Ed/Roy style. I think you captured the moment perfectly, keeping both in character. Damn, I wish we could see moments like these on screen.

I loved the last line!

I look forward to more moments like these.

"T"

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 01:07:37 UTC
pfft is it wrong that i laughed a little too much at the ed/roy style? probably, i tend to be immature like that XD

thank you thank you thank you for telling me that they are in character, i always get so worried when doing something like this, having them show outward emotion that isnt on screen (but we all know is really there, of course)
i would kill to see stuff like this on screen :D

i love that you loved it! thanks again!

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fritz42 May 7 2008, 01:14:34 UTC
*snort* I loved the icon. How fitting it is.

Can't wait for your next installment.

"T"

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