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babydee1

Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 20

Sep 04, 2011 22:23

I can't believe the last update on this was over three months ago! *iz dismayed* :-(

Ah, well. I'm back with a Crisis update. Enjoy! I've reworked the events of Season 3's Obsession to suit the current plotline as I think events would have affected it. Also...LEX!!! :-D

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chloe, crisis, clark, redkclark, rated:nc17, rated:pg13, smallville, kaloe, fanfic, chlark, kal

Comments 17

eternal_moonie September 4 2011, 21:23:23 UTC

OMG!!! Such a long time!

And I know I'm tardy for updating mine.

What an incredible chapter + another evil cliffy from the evil cliffy queen!

babydee1 September 5 2011, 11:59:53 UTC

You know I haven't posted an update if there isn't an Evil Cliffie, Jan. ;-)

Glad you liked it! :-D

jlvsclrk September 5 2011, 01:14:54 UTC

Dear Chloe,

Not the best time to be using green K on Clark.

Love,

Jen

babydee1 September 5 2011, 12:00:54 UTC

Mmm, she's not doing herself any favours, is she? *iz grim*

Thanks for commenting, Jen! :-)

mari2anne September 5 2011, 04:33:58 UTC

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babydee1 September 5 2011, 12:17:02 UTC

“OMG! She truly wants him to die!!!??? And in Lionel's clutches, no less!!!!!!???? Giving Lionel everything he's ever wanted: the farm boy, helpless... just sans the silver platter! That must have been a hellishly LONG month of clamping down her anger and hatred!”

Before you decent into hysterics, Mari, no...she doesn’t want to kill him. :-) They’re just taking a short elevator ride...or at least, that’s what she was planning on... :-/

“What an evil cliffie! You are the best at those! Each one more evil than the last. You continue to amaze me! ”

I’m beginning to scare myself, babes! :-O

“A couple of tiny questions... ”

Oh, here we go... :-)

“...did Chloe not get on the elevator? or was Clark staring at her with his X-ray vision (because the doors had already shut)? ”

A: She hung about outside while she extricated the greenK from its box (which she carries everywhere with her), and then got on the lift at the last minute. I think. ;-)

“Oh, it was SOOOOOOOOOO worth the wait, so fear not, Dee, we won't be leaving any ( ... )

iluvaqt September 5 2011, 09:25:08 UTC

At least she isn't intentionally hurting him anymore, but the warning is loud and clear. Stay away. :(

babydee1 September 5 2011, 12:02:24 UTC

She's stepping further and further into darkness, and it's not looking pretty, is it? :-(

Thanks for commenting, Kim! :-)

kitmerlot1213 September 5 2011, 12:29:23 UTC

This was just lovely!

I like that Lex wants to help Gabe and that he's worried about Chloe--Chlex lives :):)

But now we have Clark getting sick from Kryptonite again but are we sure it's Chloe and not Lionel Luthor's doing?

Keep up the wonderful work on this fic :)

babydee1 September 5 2011, 12:49:04 UTC

“This was just lovely!”

*beams* Thank you, Kit! :-D

“I like that Lex wants to help Gabe and that he's worried about Chloe--Chlex lives :):) ”

It does, indeed. And there’s more Chlexy goodness to come in this fic, just for you. ;-)

“But now we have Clark getting sick from Kryptonite again but are we sure it's Chloe and not Lionel Luthor's doing? ”

It’s all Chloe’s doing; she’s annoyed that Lionel’s upset her, and she’s not been able to punish Clark for a month, so she’s making up for lost time. And gettin’ sloppy while she’s at it. :-/

“Keep up the wonderful work on this fic :) ”

Will do. Hope to update again later this week, fingers crossed! :-)